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The death

Author's note: Its very deep but it is a good stary for kids to read and its a work in progress
Author's note: Its very deep but it is a good stary for kids to read and its a work in progress  « Hide author's note
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The lady that was talking to my aunt said she would drive my friends and I over to aunt May’s house so we didn’t have to walk any father, and so she could explain a little bit more about what happened to my parents to my aunt. On the way over to my aunts no one really said anything. I sat in the front with Anna. She tried to get me to talk a little bit but I was still so shaken up I could not even attempt to speak, the only words I got out was thank you for doing this and thank you for trying to help me out with this. She replied back with thank you and then I told her to turn right here that my aunt’s house was two-houses down on the left past the barn. When we pulled in the drive Anna looked at me and said go see your aunt and I’ll be there in just a minute. I got out and went, well I ran to the front door and just started balling again and so did my aunt when she opened the door. She reached out and game me a great big bear hug tighter than she ever has any time I’ve seen her before but now there is a good reason for one. My friends were standing behind me and my aunt called out upon them to come there and give her a hug too, so they all did and then they started crying.
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Hendog said...
Nov. 4, 2015 at 11:57 am
"I was just walking down the road with some of my friends when I hared “BOOM,” “SLAM” “CRASH” and then silence." I like the way that you used that onomatopoeia because it gives me more understanding of what happened.
EmerieMoon said...
Jul. 9, 2014 at 10:55 am
Your spelling is a bit off but otherwise this is great! Keep doing what you're doing.

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