The Cullen Girl

June 5, 2011
By Branderz BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
Branderz BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
3 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life may be filled with obstacles, but the only way through them, is to try harder than your expectations can take you.


Summary:

Ever ran away from a family that you were adopted by? Well, meet Milla, she ran away twelve times, and now her thirteenth time and is now living with the Cullens. In this twisted tail of romance, will she find luck with them or will she run away from the danger that they possess against her?

Tags: Twilight


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on Nov. 2 2011 at 10:54 pm
cantdeleteaccounthelp, Sey, West Virginia
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Well, I think I'd better tell you before that sometimes I don't understand because my "mother language" isn't English, if not Spanish. So I'll read it again more carefully and try to understand. ;)

But I really love this book!


on Nov. 2 2011 at 10:53 pm
cantdeleteaccounthelp, Sey, West Virginia
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Well, I think I'd better tell you before that sometimes I don't understand because my "mother language" isn't English, if not Spanish. So I'll read it again more carefully and try to understand. ;)

But I really love this book!


on Nov. 2 2011 at 7:53 am
Branderz BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
3 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life may be filled with obstacles, but the only way through them, is to try harder than your expectations can take you.

It's okay :) if you'd like do you mind telling me which parts are the most confusing to you?

on Nov. 1 2011 at 7:24 pm
cantdeleteaccounthelp, Sey, West Virginia
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I dont understand the story pretty much. I like the description but I dont quite get it. Im sorry because I really like the character you created ( Milla)...

on Oct. 17 2011 at 2:25 pm
JustCallMeSarah BRONZE, Iowa Falls, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
'What is faith without trust?'
~ Adam Young

I only noticed a few gramatical errors, but overall it was pretty good =)

on Aug. 17 2011 at 9:55 pm
inkblot13 PLATINUM, Auburn, New York
41 articles 1 photo 162 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If I knew where poems came from, I'd go there"




- Michael Langley, 'Staying Alive'

I'm not really found of Twilight and vampires, but this was amazing! I can't wait to read more! :D

on Aug. 17 2011 at 5:13 pm
MiNdLeSsLuVeRgIrL BRONZE, Kenly, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
If you love something let it go, if it comes back its yours if it doesn't, it never was!

make more please

Wolfs SILVER said...
on Aug. 9 2011 at 3:56 pm
Wolfs SILVER, ClarkCounty, Washington
9 articles 1 photo 2 comments
It draw me in made me want to read it it was very good

on Jun. 30 2011 at 10:08 am
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks."

"Not all those who wander are lost" --JRR Tolkien

"When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears." --Jose' Bergamin

You're welcome!!!! That'd be great!!! :D

Angie30 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 30 2011 at 9:58 am
Angie30 BRONZE, Potterville, Michigan
2 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everything will be fine in the end, if it's not fine then it's not the end.

Oops I ment for that one to be a Reply.. SORRY!

Angie30 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 30 2011 at 9:56 am
Angie30 BRONZE, Potterville, Michigan
2 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everything will be fine in the end, if it's not fine then it's not the end.

Good Luck with second one! I'd love to read it :D

emereygem said...
on Jun. 29 2011 at 7:38 am
Your very welcome!

on Jun. 28 2011 at 8:18 pm
Branderz BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
3 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life may be filled with obstacles, but the only way through them, is to try harder than your expectations can take you.

Thank you!I would love to read some of your work! :')

on Jun. 28 2011 at 8:17 pm
Branderz BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
3 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life may be filled with obstacles, but the only way through them, is to try harder than your expectations can take you.

Thanks soo much! I plan on soon writing a sequel to this! :')

on Jun. 28 2011 at 8:17 pm
Branderz BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
3 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life may be filled with obstacles, but the only way through them, is to try harder than your expectations can take you.

Lol, thank you! :')

emereygem said...
on Jun. 28 2011 at 10:56 am
I truly liked it! It was very good! The description, and the imagery you burnt into my head! This was incredible. I would have never came up with something like this...lol

Angie30 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 27 2011 at 2:50 pm
Angie30 BRONZE, Potterville, Michigan
2 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everything will be fine in the end, if it's not fine then it's not the end.

This is really good! I loved how you described everything and also how you mixed Milla into the story. :)

on Jun. 17 2011 at 2:23 pm
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
35 articles 0 photos 782 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks."

"Not all those who wander are lost" --JRR Tolkien

"When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears." --Jose' Bergamin

That was pretty good it was probably one of the best twilight-fan-fictions on this website.  The end was a little confusing but that could be just me.  Good job!!!! :D Can you please read some of my stuff?


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