Leaving Thoughts

May 27, 2011
By nlacombe BRONZE, Billings, Montana
nlacombe BRONZE, Billings, Montana
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Either you think, or else others have to think for you and take power from you, pervert and discipline your natural tastes, civilize and sterilize you.


Summary:

I ran and I could hear the leaves crush under my feet. I knew I wasn’t on a trail anymore because I was stumbling and tripping over rocks, stumps, and all sorts of decayed mulch. But as I focused on my footsteps, it seemed as if I heard two more feet mocking my very running pattern. I told myself not to look back and just keep running. I began to run faster and faster, and the footsteps behind became louder and louder. It felt like I ran for miles. Now at a dead sprint I realized I still heard the feet right behind me. And I began to turn left, and then a sharp right, avoiding trees at all costs. Before I could do anything, I felt my body go ahead of my feet and watched myself smack face first into a pile of decayed leaves and twigs. My face was numb with pain, and I could only hear myself breathe. As my hearing finally came to, all I could hear was a slow walk, almost march, toward me. I couldn’t see anything. I began to scream.


Nate L.

Leaving Thoughts


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AliLinnS GOLD said...
on Jul. 10 2011 at 2:14 am
AliLinnS GOLD, Heislerville, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"I love you, sweet Kate. And I'm truly sorry about this. I do feel...everything." -Casanova
Kiss The Girls by James Patterson

This is amazing, Sweetheart! The whole theme was just amazing! The message was so clear to me! Wonder, darling! You did just wonderful! Good job, Sweetheart! Good job! :D

on Jun. 13 2011 at 6:29 am
nlacombe BRONZE, Billings, Montana
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Either you think, or else others have to think for you and take power from you, pervert and discipline your natural tastes, civilize and sterilize you.

Thanks, I really appreciate the feed back. I agree with you on writing it first. I'm kind of a, write-now-fix-later kind of guy lol =)

on Jun. 12 2011 at 10:57 pm
cHicKEnWaNg1 SILVER, Marietta, Georgia
9 articles 1 photo 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
It aint no thang but a chicken wang

this was great i coulnt stop reading but for future refrences i suggest making sure you have the store pin straight before typing but it was truly a great story and i do believe love is the center of all plz check out some of my work




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