Stroke of Midnight chpt 1

February 21, 2011
By CheshireCat PLATINUM, paducah, Kentucky
CheshireCat PLATINUM, Paducah, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
We're all mad here


Summary:

claire catherine and mikayla are stuck on a roadtrip to canada finding new friends and enemeys while they are on their way to war


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Stroke of Midnight chpt 1


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Meme13 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 6 2012 at 7:57 pm
Meme13 BRONZE, Scotch Plains, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
This is a poem by Robert frost:
Nature's first green is gold.
Her hardest hue to hold.
Her early leaf's a flower,
But only so an hour.
Then leaf subsides to leaf.
So Eden sank to grief.
So dawn goes down today.
Nothing gold can stay.

I think your story is ok, but work on explaining things more; i was confused about a lot of things, like if Logan was a boy or girl.




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