HARRY POTTER CONTINUED

January 8, 2011
By TeardropsInApril GOLD, Hillsborough, California
TeardropsInApril GOLD, Hillsborough, California
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Favorite Quote:
"live, love, laugh!"


Summary:

This starts right after the last page of the book but before the epilogue. This talks about all the things that happened in between them finishing Voldemort and then as adults. Included: How everyone gets married, the kids of course, and the fast-paced adventure of finding and capturing the remaining Death Eaters and followers.


Kristin S.

HARRY POTTER CONTINUED


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RealHPFan said...
on Dec. 31 2012 at 8:53 am
I think you ruined the relationships between Harry, Ginny, Hermione and Ron...you turned Hermione into someone she's not, and totally discarded Ron and Ginny - and Malfoy being in love with Hermione? None of this makes sense! None of these characters had these 'secret feelings' for each other - no offence, as I'm sure you spent a long time on this - but personally, I think this would have worked as a normal book, not fan fiction. Any reader of the books knows this would never happen, sorry to spoil your fantasy!

on Dec. 10 2012 at 12:34 pm
TeardropsInApril GOLD, Hillsborough, California
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Favorite Quote:
"live, love, laugh!"

Sorry, I accidentally wrote my response to you as a new comment so my response is above yours! Thanks guys! 

on Dec. 10 2012 at 12:33 pm
TeardropsInApril GOLD, Hillsborough, California
14 articles 0 photos 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
"live, love, laugh!"

I knooooooow lol I have SOOO many mistakes haha and I am so sorry!! This idea for this came so suddenly and I just typed, typed, typed not even regarding the mistakes! But I promise you I will fix everything when I revise it!! I've been so busy, I haven't had time to do it! But thank you for the comments, I will fix them as soon as possible. Stay tuned and happy reading! :D

J1029 SILVER said...
on Dec. 6 2012 at 9:27 pm
J1029 SILVER, Tampa, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Sing like no one is listening,
Dance like no one is watching,
Love like you've never been hurt and
Live like it's heaven on earth.

- Mark Twain

Me and my friend were reading this. My opinion: I loved how deep you went into the relationships. It was cool to see everyones perspective. You should definitely keep writing fan fictions. Great job! My friend who is also HP fangirl crazy says: 1. Ginny's eyes are brown not green 2. Why is sirus not mention with all the people who died, dumbledore too 3. It felt kinda choppy 4. She liked it overall, but she is completely obsessed and memorized every word of the series and know a bunch of random facts and everything needs to be perfect. Sorry for the complaints keep writing :)

on Dec. 4 2012 at 1:52 am
TeardropsInApril GOLD, Hillsborough, California
14 articles 0 photos 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
"live, love, laugh!"

Thank you!! That is such a sweet compliment :) And I don't want any spoilers...but eventually they will because in Rowling's original "Nineteen Years Later" Epilogue, they are all back where they belong. So stay tuned for more and thank you! X)

on Dec. 4 2012 at 1:51 am
TeardropsInApril GOLD, Hillsborough, California
14 articles 0 photos 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
"live, love, laugh!"

Woah....that was a lot of writing lol And yes I can tell you're insanely obsessed hahaha Which is awesome!!!! :) I know I know I know this is a complete Twilight thing and when I was writing it, I guess it sort of flowed in there. I appreciate all the HP facts, though, I really had a hard time remembering who died and who didn't so that helps a lot! Thank you so much! :D :D :D

on Dec. 4 2012 at 1:47 am
TeardropsInApril GOLD, Hillsborough, California
14 articles 0 photos 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
"live, love, laugh!"

I know I really want to send it to her so bad :( but anyway Thank you so much!! Stay tuned!! :D

on Nov. 24 2012 at 7:45 pm
starwriter GOLD, Durango, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
Hearing voices no one else can hear isn't a good sign, even in the wizarding world.
-J. K. Rowling

I love this, your like a mini J.K Rowling. I think Harry should go back to Ginny though, but I don't know about Hermine. Please post more!!!

harry.is.#1 said...
on Nov. 5 2012 at 8:31 pm
how dare you defile the noble and sacred works of J.K Rowling!

lalaland said...
on Nov. 4 2012 at 10:09 pm
I only read the first page so far and it seems great but one miner detail got me. i may be wrong but im pretty sure Hermione cast the spell on her parents knowing that she could later go to them and reverse it. i could be way off but you might want to check it out. :)

on Oct. 20 2012 at 11:48 am
chrisvfree PLATINUM, N/A, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
I pretty much try to stay in a constant state of confusion just because of the expression it leaves on my face. - Johnny Depp

  First, I have to say that I am and always have been a HUGE, obsessive Harry Potter fan, so I apologize if I am a bit nitpicky, but as I can tell you are a big HP fan yourself, I’m sure that you will understand this. I will begin by saying that I, overall, appreciated this piece of fan fiction. I see that you are taking advantage of this opportunity by allowing us into the minds of all the characters rather than solely Harry, as was customary during J.K.’s writing. Mostly I will be commenting on a few details that I noticed, because personally I do not believe in suggesting for someone to change their storyline or anything like that. I am just giving you my honest opinion, and of course you can opt whether to consider it to be advice or not.   I simultaneously appreciated and did not appreciate seeing a different side to the main characters of your story, namely Harry, Ron, Ginny, and Hermione. I see that you have taken on a, for lack of a better word, “hungry” love sort of approach, focusing more on the relationships and the aftermath more than anything else. Now this is just my opinion— as I began to read I was struck by how deeply you dove into their love/personal lives. While J.K. never was one to shy away from romance, I was surprised to absorb a bit of a Twilight-esque love-triangle vibe a few times here. Though I really appreciate that you observed the small inkling of emotion that seemed to flame between Hermione and Harry in certain books, I was slightly put off by the sudden immoral romance between the two, as it was made clear in DH that they would remain close friends, and that they were each devoted to their respective partner… this just bothered me. But I see that you wished to create a bit of relationship-related conflict here, which rocks, so, definite pluses there.   In certain passages I thought that some people were a little out of character, such as during Ron’s preliminary proposal trip with Hermione… lost a bit of his awkward-but-endearing character there, he reminded me more of Edward Cullen. And speaking of Edward Cullen, the Mrs. Potter phrases was a little reminiscent of that as well, and that was a little distracting, it was difficult for me to see Harry saying that, but that’s just my opinion of course :) And while George Weasley certainly was IN character, it was strange to see him so quickly back to his trickster personality, it seems like he would be more withdrawn than anything, with his best-friend and brother gone. Hermione usually is not TOTALLY sensitive when it comes to boys and love (though she was rather upset when Ron dated Lavender Brown), sort of lost a bit of her determined intelligence and ambition there, because readers aren’t used to seeing her so extremely unsure… but if that’s the path you’re going down for your book, I understand that.   Have you considered a Harry Potter-Twilight crossover? I’m not a Twi-hard fan or anything (nothing replaces my crazy fangirl HP obsession), but I thought that Zenrir reminded me of Jacob Black, as his adoration with Hermione was similar to Jacob’s imprinting, which I guess is sort of clever if that was what you were going for. I appreciated Draco’s appearance, if you were attempting to explain the nod he gave Harry in the DH Epilogue.   I’ll tie this review up with a few minor but important details: Griphook the goblin died in Deathly Hallows; Lavender Brown died in the Deathly Hallows (attacked by Fenrir Greyback); Bellatrix Lestrange’s husband’s full name is Rodolphus Lestrange; Luna and Dean did not get hooked up— Luna married the grandson of Newt Scamander, Rolf, according to J.K. Rowling (which sorta disappointed me, I expected Neville and Luna to get together…); J.K. Rowling also revealed that George hooked up with Angelina Johnson. Fawkes disappeared forever after singing his lament to Dumbledore in HBP. Other than that, definitely look over it again for grammar issues and stuff.   Let me know if this helped any! Keep writing— you’re good.

Jelly1717 said...
on Oct. 6 2012 at 3:28 pm
Jelly1717, Park City, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
In the beginning there was nothing. God said, 'Let there be light!' And there was light. There was still nothing, but you could see it a whole lot better.















-Ellen DeGeneres

*hermione* sorry

Jelly1717 said...
on Oct. 6 2012 at 3:16 pm
Jelly1717, Park City, Utah
0 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
In the beginning there was nothing. God said, 'Let there be light!' And there was light. There was still nothing, but you could see it a whole lot better.















-Ellen DeGeneres

I thought this was great book, although as soon as the whole harry/hermoine thing started I got a little indignant, but I looked at the comments and cant wait to see what happens next! You are an amazing writer! I felt like I was actually in the story! Also, there are a few spelling mistakes in there, and in a couple places you put the wrong names down, but it was absolutely amazing! You really should send this to J.K Rowling!

on Oct. 5 2012 at 11:16 pm
TeardropsInApril GOLD, Hillsborough, California
14 articles 0 photos 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
"live, love, laugh!"

Well, I am sorry, but I have never met a werewolf, so I wouldn't know how they act. If you know, please tell me. Thank you! :)

on Oct. 5 2012 at 11:15 pm
TeardropsInApril GOLD, Hillsborough, California
14 articles 0 photos 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
"live, love, laugh!"

Thanks to both comments! Stay posted :)

Emma2012 said...
on Aug. 28 2012 at 12:43 pm
i love this but i dont get the HErmione/ron/malfoy/harry  thing.... i also think that ginny/ harry and hermione/ron should all work out in the endd....

on Aug. 21 2012 at 7:29 am
SweetDreamer78, London, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind

this book was very entertaining and funny and because I know Harry Potter books so well, it's humerous to see the characters portrayed like that even if most of the events that occured were out of character. It's a great story though so I can't wait to see what happns next!

on Aug. 20 2012 at 3:36 pm
SweetDreamer78, London, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind

I think your Book is entertaining and also funny in places but can't imagine that Harry's character would cheat on Ginny (especially if she was pregnant), and with Hermione of all people because they were like brother and sister.  Then, there's a bit of a twilight thing with Zenrir and Ron. I also can't help feel that Hermione would have those sort of feelings for Harry or Malfoy, however it was one of the best things I've read because I love Harry Potter and it's very entertaining to see it portrayed in that way

on Jul. 20 2012 at 6:06 pm
The werewolves in this seem to be the acting the same way that the werewolves in Twilight do...which is not what they do

on Jul. 6 2012 at 6:30 pm
TeardropsInApril GOLD, Hillsborough, California
14 articles 0 photos 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
"live, love, laugh!"

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