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HomeA Rose Without Thorns, Still Called a Rose?
A Rose Without Thorns, Still Called a Rose?
Summary: This is a cute yet forbidden love story between a young heart and an old one. Between student and professor.
msoledadvcI support the comments above. It's a little unrealistic and messed up a few things but it is very nice. Write more! I want to know what is happens...
secretlypoetic
This book was interesting, but also very unrealistic... I would be very interested to know why she already hated Lucius, and why Fenrir was able to get to her. I like your writing style though!
Yeah, this book is still a work in progress. The reasons to her hateful spite towards Lucius is coming very soon, as well as the reasons behind why Fenrir gets to her so well. :)
Haha Yes I know there was the how Wizarding Worl battle, but I didn't want so much drama in the begining so I cut that out. xD And thank you, your nice comments make me write more. :)
DinoNuggetThis was a wonderful story. I liked it very much, but there is one thing that irks me a little. Around Draco's graduation time, there was the whole Hogwarts battle, and Snape died. That's my only real problem. Unless Draco was a year younger than her...? Although, I don't think the years mix during classes. Your writing style was very good. Keep up the good work. Write on!
I wanted to base this story on a rare thing that happens to some young girls to rais peoples awareness on it. :)
Ys sorry about that i got all worked up in my writing and often forget! :O
More is coming!
bahannahpeel
I liked this story, it kind of freaked me out a little though. Is Chloe exceptionally beautiful, so all the older men want a go at her?
Also, somtimes in the first person you used 'he'. I know that can get confusing--I do it all the time!
I liked it. the ending was a bit unrealistic, but good. Is there more? I'd love to read it
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