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One Shot

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I’m in my gillie suit in the dark dense forest, it is nighttime. I radio Clay who is on the far east side of the forest. “Hey Clay what do u see?”.
“Nothing yet, base said that the target isn’t supposed to show up yet we got at least 15 minutes,” he says. That gives me a lot of time to set up my silenced M40 sniper rifle and get everything set up so I will be ready to take the shot. It seems like it was just yesterday I was in the recruiting center getting nagged by the recruiter. “Micheal, he is coming, third vehicle!” my spotter said to me as I went back to reality. “Zackoroff is in the third vehicle, Black SUV,” my spotter says to me.
“I see him now,” said Micheal. Zackoroff is the person that I have been hunting for two years. He is wanted for biochemical warfare. He set off a bomb in London killing thousands of people, including my brother who was visiting my aunt and uncle and now, I have the one chance I have been waiting for to take this bastard out. “Adjust your scope and calibrate your rifle the wind is getting a little choppy.” “Wait till you know you have the shot.” He is entering the building now, I don’t have the shot he entered the building were going to have to relocate,” I say. “Alright I know a spot but it is going to be dangerous Micheal, HQ never said to risk your life they just said take the shot when you know you can.” “I know but I know I can do it how dangerous is it going to be?” “I hope you’re right Micheal.” “Trust me I’m sure.” I say to Clay. “Okay, first you need to go down the hill tell me when you get there” “Okay.” I say. I grab my rifle and start to walk down the hill, I check my surroundings I look left and right. I start to walk across the bend of the hill when I get interrupted.
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macarr7 said...
Feb. 2, 2012 at 10:13 pm
A good book needs a few tweaks here and there I just wish you made more drawn out building up to the climax.
Sniper said...
Jan. 25, 2012 at 1:19 pm
Please people who read my book send some comments to help me improve on the sequel of this book im making thx:)
Sniper said...
Jan. 25, 2012 at 7:20 am
This is my first book so dont go too harsh

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