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HomeAn Unforgettable Quest
By Anonymous, Lawrenceville, NJ
Author's note:
If you know of the show Supernatural, then you may love this. In this, Sam and Dean (or Matt)...
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Intruder
After about five hours of driving we came to a little village that was very kind to us. They offered food and shelter. We humbly accepted and stayed the night there. I got to sleep easy, but Matt didn't, he was so worried for dad that he couldn't sleep. To get him to sleep, I told him that if dad were in trouble, he could handle himself. That seemed to calm Matt down enough to fall asleep. I thought to myself 'Why don't I have that kind of relationship with dad. It is because I wasn’t as loyal
sorry it's short 
I woke up to the sound of someone unlocking the door. I made sure I didn't wake my up. I grabbed the nearest weapon I could, it happened to be a bat, and waited near the door. When the person entered, I knocked him out with one swing of the bat, which woke Matt up.
“Oh my god.” Matt said stunned. I also looked at the person and was amazed to see who it was; the tall, strong man that resembled me.
EMJOLIEI really enjoyed this novel. I think you had the perfect amount of detail as well! Great work
CountryPopGirl
Thanks soooo much. Whenever i asked my family how it was they would say something like "It's fine" or "It's sounds like you just wrote down what you saw on a TV show"
the first response bugged me because I hate the word fine (don't ask)
the second was actually what I was going for. You get a kind of movie in your head as you read it.
Anyway, thanks for the comment.
Also, the tpo comment was when I first published it. I forgot a chapter, but i fixed it... (more »)
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