Empires at war

May 11, 2011
By Horrid_G, San Lorenzo, California
Horrid_G, San Lorenzo, California
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Summary:

The acient greek and eqyptain fight


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Empires at war


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on Aug. 18 2011 at 6:53 pm
ZephyrVon-ZombieOverlord BRONZE, Cartersville, Virginia
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The knack of flying is learning how to throw yourself at the ground and miss. -Douglas Adams

Hi, i'm the guy who wrote Pirates Vs. Vampires. One tip: your story goes too fast. In the first few paragraphs, he discovers his mothers name. And one more thing- I doubt Zeus would stutter in the face of his child. It would most likely be the other way around...

P.s. - I also wrote a greek story. Look for Omega...


Horrid_G said...
on May. 17 2011 at 8:18 pm
Horrid_G, San Lorenzo, California
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please post constructive critism


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