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Summary: Elias has become a god. The problem is, his nemesis has become a titan. He must fight him and discover the hidden power within himself.
Toran
readaholic
I like it....but I wish you would've elaborated more. Like, introduce the characters before you throw them into all this. All these names come at you so suddenly, it's kind of hard to keep track. Other than that, love the idea! May I ask why you made a second novel instead of just adding to this one?
Steph0804
shootingstar97Reminds me a lot of Lightning Theif :D good idea though. although, i did get a bit confussed at the end - where the going over to see Chris or that Z-guy?
Well, i was trying to change the names up right before i sent it in, but igues i forgot a few names... Chris=Xeires
tealbird said...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 5:30 pm:
Aug. 31, 2011 at 5:30 pm:
I think you should first know that I'm not a big fan of contemporary re-vamps of mythology. I have nothing against the genre, of course, and nothing against you for writing this story. If I do say so, this does the genre a great justice, and it is very well written. I like how your dialogue flows nicely with the description, which is something a lot of young writers have trouble with as adolescents. I know this may sound kinda weird, but it's written like a real novel that'd you'd find on a book... (more »)
Thank you, and i understand that you simply do not enjoy reading that kind of literature, which is perfectly reasonable. This is the second major story i've ever worked on, and i am working on recreating the first one, INK...
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