Teen Ink

You're an amazing author.

I like it....but I wish you would've elaborated more. Like, introduce the characters before you throw them into all this. All these names come at you so suddenly, it's kind of hard to keep track. Other than that, love the idea! May I ask why you made a second novel instead of just adding to this one?

Wow! Keep this up! I want to read more!

Reminds me a lot of Lightning Theif :D good idea though. although, i did get a bit confussed at the end - where the going over to see Chris or that Z-guy?

I think you should first know that I'm not a big fan of contemporary re-vamps of mythology. I have nothing against the genre, of course, and nothing against you for writing this story. If I do say so, this does the genre a great justice, and it is very well written. I like how your dialogue flows nicely with the description, which is something a lot of young writers have trouble with as adolescents. I know this may sound kinda weird, but it's written like a real novel that'd you'd find on a book... (more »)