THE WOODS

January 21, 2011
By Josh.W.Campbell, sandy, Utah
Josh.W.Campbell, Sandy, Utah
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Summary:

Jason Winchester, a man with no sense of fear is surviving the final days of Earth. When an unknown group of spies en prison Jason and his friends, things get crazier when a special item given to Jason turns the world around.

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RoseOzera said...
on Jan. 30 2011 at 8:50 pm

hey josh! i love the ending to your story, its amanda from creative writing. i agree with timekepper though, very few small errors, nothing huge though.

 

you should check out my final draft of 'one queit whisper'.

 

thanks XD


on Jan. 29 2011 at 1:21 pm
Timekeeper DIAMOND, Cary, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"A guy walks up to me and asks 'What's Punk?'. So I kick over a garbage can and say 'That's punk!'. So he kicks over a garbage can and says 'That's Punk'?, and I say 'No that's trendy'!"- Billie Joe Armstrong, Green Day

This is cool, but I recommend getting someone to spell check and review your work before submitting it, I noticed a few minor errors ("en prisoned" rather than imprisoned).

 

It's really cool though, it reminded me of a modern super hero.

 

Please check out my novel SuperNOVA and leave your thoughts on it. Thanks :D





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