Diary of a Teenage Sociopath

December 22, 2010
By -MidnightAngel- GOLD, A Field of Paper Flowers, California
-MidnightAngel- GOLD, A Field Of Paper Flowers, California
11 articles 47 photos 112 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I believe in everything until it's disproved. So I believe in fairies, the myths, dragons. It all exists, even if it's in your mind. Who's to say that dreams and nightmares aren't as real as the here and now?"


Summary:

Diary of a teenage sociopath follows the tragic and horrifying life of a teenager named Erin who suffers from Antisocial Personality Disorder.The story starts when Erin is sixteen, living at home with her foster parents and foster sister. She leads a seemingly normal life, going to great lengths to keep her sociopathic nature a secret from everyone other than her little sister who she regulerly torments just for fun. That is, until a new girl comes to her school named Niki. Erin sees this now girl as a threat to her secrets and desides that drastic mesures must be taken to ensure Niki's silence.


-MidnightAngel-

Diary of a Teenage Sociopath


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on Jun. 2 2011 at 9:00 pm
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!! AMAZING!!!!!!  I could just imagine every second pass by :D Hey, if you can, check out my poems "Silent all these  Years" and "Drowning Deep Under" THANX!!!!!!!!!!!!

on May. 20 2011 at 9:35 pm
I couldn't help but hope that Erin got away... lol I guess I'm wierd:-)

on May. 17 2011 at 6:04 pm
Well that was creepy...in a good way though!

on May. 15 2011 at 5:49 pm
WOW! i love tis! i totaly didnt see the end coming!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bka341997 GOLD said...
on May. 13 2011 at 10:29 am
Bka341997 GOLD, Bigfork, Montana
11 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take but by the moments that take our breath away!

Read the first page thingy of it...nice:) cant wait to read more, but for its time for me to write.

on Apr. 30 2011 at 4:48 pm
kristibell852 BRONZE, Colorado Springs, Colorado
2 articles 0 photos 3 comments
an ending that you dont expect .... verry interesting

on Apr. 21 2011 at 5:52 pm
-MidnightAngel- GOLD, A Field Of Paper Flowers, California
11 articles 47 photos 112 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I believe in everything until it's disproved. So I believe in fairies, the myths, dragons. It all exists, even if it's in your mind. Who's to say that dreams and nightmares aren't as real as the here and now?"

Thank you:-)

I read mostly about antisocial personality disorder in the DSM (diegnostic and statisitcal manuel of mental disorders). I also read some articles online about famouse child and teen murderes and interveiws people had done with them. sociopathx (dot) c o m is a pretty good site on the subject too:-)

 


on Apr. 21 2011 at 9:31 am
KristySparklez BRONZE, Sterling, Colorado
2 articles 0 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
Time only numbs all pain, it does not heal the wounds created by, nor does it heal the pain

Ok, I absolutely love it. I'll be putting up my new story "Secrets Kept Within" I'd like it if you could look at it when its posted. anyways, back to your story, the concept is like amazing and how you portrayed the charachter is just brilliant. I mean, how did you know sociopaths only feel their emotions? For themselves and no one else? You'd have to be like studying the chronicle behaviors and analyzing them ever so carefully. I'm doing that to be able to understand them much more efficiently so I have a better understanding of them to be able to put some in my books. But please, tell me how did you come to find everything you need to know? If I could understand, maybe it would help me with my books...

PJD17 SILVER said...
on Mar. 24 2011 at 3:48 pm
PJD17 SILVER, Belleville, Illinois
8 articles 0 photos 624 comments

Favorite Quote:
I do the best imatation of myself- Ben Folds

a very unique concept and a very good story   id be interested to read some more of your work  could you please take a look at and comment on my story  Manso's Shame  i would really appreciate it

on Mar. 22 2011 at 9:15 pm
-MidnightAngel- GOLD, A Field Of Paper Flowers, California
11 articles 47 photos 112 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I believe in everything until it's disproved. So I believe in fairies, the myths, dragons. It all exists, even if it's in your mind. Who's to say that dreams and nightmares aren't as real as the here and now?"

Thank you for the sugjestion, but I did acomplish what I was trying to. And I called it "Diary of a Teenage Sociopath" becuse it sounded catchy and it took place through her eyes.

Anon said...
on Mar. 22 2011 at 12:37 am
You have a wonderful concept, but I find that it doesn't really feel like a diary as I'm reading it. When writing diaries, people generally don't include much dialogue, because they usually don't remember conversations word-for-word. I think you might achieve more of what you're aiming for if you summarize conversations more, but keep the more important important quotes, such as "You know, it would be really easy for you to trip and fall down the stairs."

on Mar. 9 2011 at 9:03 pm
Plush_Baneling BRONZE, Denver, Colorado
2 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I will devour the world, after that the universe, and when there is nothing but me, I will devour myself"
ME!

Sorry, my schools taught me they feel no emotion

on Mar. 9 2011 at 2:54 am
-MidnightAngel- GOLD, A Field Of Paper Flowers, California
11 articles 47 photos 112 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I believe in everything until it's disproved. So I believe in fairies, the myths, dragons. It all exists, even if it's in your mind. Who's to say that dreams and nightmares aren't as real as the here and now?"

Sociopaths do feel there own emotion just like anyone else does, it's just that they do have compassion or empathy for anyone else.

on Mar. 8 2011 at 9:40 pm
Plush_Baneling BRONZE, Denver, Colorado
2 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I will devour the world, after that the universe, and when there is nothing but me, I will devour myself"
ME!

This is an amazingly written piece, but I do have a question. Why does she feel rage as a sociopath?

evergreen232 said...
on Mar. 8 2011 at 6:03 pm
evergreen232, Portland, Oregon
0 articles 3 photos 21 comments
YES YES YES!!! i totally agree w/u!!!! this is a really great peice!! KEEP IT UP!!!!

on Mar. 8 2011 at 3:45 pm
CWells_521 DIAMOND, Greene, New York
81 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
The best things in life are unseen, that's why you close your eyes when you kiss, cry, or dream.
What doesn't kill you, only makes you stronger.

Wow, this is amazingly creepy. I loved the way you wrote it, it made me feel like I was actually there. I love these kind of topics and you portrayed it perfectly. Keep it up!

on Mar. 8 2011 at 8:44 am
MysteryHeart GOLD, Thorold, Other
14 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Usted es especial! AKWARD!!! (in an opera like voice), ohhh fasha', what the huh?,who in the name of what?, sanity now!

I love it would totaly make the perfect twilight zone episode

on Mar. 1 2011 at 6:54 pm
D.B.Kinkers BRONZE,
1 article 0 photos 16 comments
I absolutly love this.

on Feb. 17 2011 at 2:31 pm
InsomniaticWriter SILVER, Freehold, New Jersey
9 articles 1 photo 1 comment
This is amazing. You captured the extreme side of the disorder really well. Keep it up, and don't ever let anyone tell you that your writing is too creepy or too scary or even that it makes you sound crazy. After all, some of the best authors are/were crazy.

on Feb. 14 2011 at 10:38 pm
Wow... Just wow. Erin was crazy, and this may sound crazy, but I was hoping she would make it (only because she was the main character)


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