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Diary of a Teenage Sociopath
Summary: Diary of a teenage sociopath follows the tragic and horrifying life of a teenager named Erin who suffers from Antisocial Personality Disorder.The story starts when Erin is sixteen, living at home with her foster parents and foster sister. She leads a seemingly normal life, going to great lengths to keep her sociopathic nature a secret from everyone other than her little sister who she regulerly torments just for fun. That is, until a new girl comes to her school named Niki. Erin sees this now girl as a threat to her secrets and desides that drastic mesures must be taken to ensure Niki's silence.



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JustMeDownHere...This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 9 at 2:54 pm:
this was my first and only thing I have read so far on here, but I doubt anything can compare! It is amazing, well composed, fit toegther PERFECTLY, and it catchs your interest right when you start to read it.
 
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Surobhi_MoitrayeeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 9 at 7:56 am:
my god!! you're danm talented!! you rock!! :-)
 
-MidnightAngel-This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 9 at 7:33 pm :
Thank you! :-)
 
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CountryPopGirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 26, 2011 at 8:16 pm:
You need to make a sequel. I would be devastates if you just left it there.
 
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_Hot_Dog_Maniac_ said...
Oct. 24, 2011 at 5:56 pm:
Cool :D           You really ought to write a sequal.
 
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PurpleWriter said...
Sept. 22, 2011 at 7:20 pm:
when are u going to post the 2nd one? and what is it going to be called?
 
-MidnightAngel-This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 23, 2011 at 8:27 pm :
It's going to be called, Erin's Revenge, (corny, I know lol), But unfourtunetly it's gotten a bit to big for TI :-\ 
 
PurpleWriter replied...
Sept. 25, 2011 at 7:12 pm :
Please, try to put it on. Oh, and I would really appreciate it if you could check out my book. Its called The Searcher's Allies
 
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prettylittlewriterThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 13, 2011 at 10:01 pm:
Wow, that is really good. I still can't understand why someone could kill someone, but I really thought this story was very realistic and it taught me that sociopathic people just have no emotion. You are very talented. Can't wait to read more
 
andromeda13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 12, 2011 at 7:07 pm :
well they have emotion just no regret for their actions or concern for other people. to them people arn't friends or family they are just people that can be munipulated and used. 
 
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PedophobicThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 19, 2011 at 12:42 am:
I forgot to include in my last comment that i really really liked this, and that you should continue the story.
 
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Mackenzie29 said...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 3:26 pm:
WOOWWWW!!!! That was amazing, i love how you made your characters so realistic. You could see this happening in real life and it really makes you question the people around you. I loved it :D
 
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writerfreak21231This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 8:29 am:
It was was AWESOME!!! great job! (Sorry for advrertizing) I just wrote two stories called nightstalker and the beast. If anyone could check them out and post some comments and feedback that would be great. Thanks! and keep writing everybody! :)(:
 
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dragonbeeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 26, 2011 at 10:06 pm:
haha exactly it was amazing you'll be bigger than stephanie meyers good job
 
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Starshiner345 said...
Jun. 2, 2011 at 9:00 pm:
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!! AMAZING!!!!!!  I could just imagine every second pass by :D Hey, if you can, check out my poems "Silent all these  Years" and "Drowning Deep Under" THANX!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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ForeverFreedom said...
May 17, 2011 at 6:04 pm:
Well that was creepy...in a good way though!
 
CreatureOfHabbit replied...
May 20, 2011 at 9:35 pm :
I couldn't help but hope that Erin got away... lol I guess I'm wierd:-)
 
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HorrorLover28 said...
May 15, 2011 at 5:49 pm:
WOW! i love tis! i totaly didnt see the end coming!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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Bka341997This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 13, 2011 at 10:29 am:
Read the first page thingy of it...nice:) cant wait to read more, but for its time for me to write.
 
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kristibell852 said...
Apr. 30, 2011 at 4:48 pm:
an ending that you dont expect .... verry interesting
 
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Jonesychic said...
Apr. 21, 2011 at 9:31 am:
Ok, I absolutely love it. I'll be putting up my new story "Secrets Kept Within" I'd like it if you could look at it when its posted. anyways, back to your story, the concept is like amazing and how you portrayed the charachter is just brilliant. I mean, how did you know sociopaths only feel their emotions? For themselves and no one else? You'd have to be like studying the chronicle behaviors and analyzing them ever so carefully. I'm doing that to be able to understand them much more efficiently ... (more »)
 
-MidnightAngel-This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 21, 2011 at 5:52 pm :

Thank you:-)

I read mostly about antisocial personality disorder in the DSM (diegnostic and statisitcal manuel of mental disorders). I also read some articles online about famouse child and teen murderes and interveiws people had done with them. sociopathx (dot) c o m is a pretty good site on the subject too:-)

 

 
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PJD17 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 24, 2011 at 3:48 pm:
a very unique concept and a very good story   id be interested to read some more of your work  could you please take a look at and comment on my story  Manso's Shame  i would really appreciate it
 
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Anon said...
Mar. 22, 2011 at 12:37 am:
You have a wonderful concept, but I find that it doesn't really feel like a diary as I'm reading it. When writing diaries, people generally don't include much dialogue, because they usually don't remember conversations word-for-word. I think you might achieve more of what you're aiming for if you summarize conversations more, but keep the more important important quotes, such as "You know, it would be really easy for you to trip and fall down the stairs."
 
-MidnightAngel-This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 22, 2011 at 9:15 pm :
Thank you for the sugjestion, but I did acomplish what I was trying to. And I called it "Diary of a Teenage Sociopath" becuse it sounded catchy and it took place through her eyes.
 
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Halfing_Scribe said...
Mar. 8, 2011 at 9:40 pm:
This is an amazingly written piece, but I do have a question. Why does she feel rage as a sociopath?
 
-MidnightAngel-This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 9, 2011 at 2:54 am :
Sociopaths do feel there own emotion just like anyone else does, it's just that they do have compassion or empathy for anyone else.
 
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Mar. 9, 2011 at 9:03 pm :
Sorry, my schools taught me they feel no emotion
 
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CWells_521This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 8, 2011 at 3:45 pm:
Wow, this is amazingly creepy. I loved the way you wrote it, it made me feel like I was actually there. I love these kind of topics and you portrayed it perfectly. Keep it up!
 
evergreen232This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 8, 2011 at 6:03 pm :
YES YES YES!!! i totally agree w/u!!!! this is a really great peice!! KEEP IT UP!!!!
 
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MysteryHeart said...
Mar. 8, 2011 at 8:44 am:
I love it would totaly make the perfect twilight zone episode
 
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InsomniaticWriter said...
Feb. 17, 2011 at 2:31 pm:
This is amazing. You captured the extreme side of the disorder really well. Keep it up, and don't ever let anyone tell you that your writing is too creepy or too scary or even that it makes you sound crazy. After all, some of the best authors are/were crazy.
 
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Halfing_Scribe said...
Feb. 14, 2011 at 10:38 pm:
Wow... Just wow. Erin was crazy, and this may sound crazy, but I was hoping she would make it (only because she was the main character)
 
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WillowFalls This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 10, 2011 at 9:47 am:
This girl is insane! Really creeped me out! Good writing though, keep it up! :)
 
D.B.KinkersThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 1, 2011 at 6:54 pm :
I absolutly love this.
 
PedophobicThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 19, 2011 at 12:39 am :

Great story

at first i thought the writing was a little to much like stephanie myers, a plus for some but i dont like her writing style, but as i read further it became very interesting to read

the only problems i see are the visual descriptions of the characters

what do they look like? Is erin short, tall, fat, pretty, ugly? is she white?

that most is sort of implied unless her hair is bleached, but what about everyone else?

and the only other thing that bo... (more »)

 
Demons.and.Angels replied...
Feb. 29 at 11:06 am :
Sociopaths do have emotions. I know this because I am one. I've three emotions, angry, sad and happy, but it hard to make fell one of these emotions.
 
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