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Shadows In The Rain

Lightning flashed across the sky. Rain had fallen and soaked the city below the dark ominous cloud. Rain kept fallen for a few hours when lightning again flashed down the sky. What was different was that it seemed to leave a shadow that was darker and much more malevolent.
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Mantisman630 said...
Jan. 7, 2013 at 6:31 pm
I like it, keep it more mysterious and shadowy and drag on the reader's inquisitve nature to succeed. One suggestion, try to maybe pull the sections together into a few chapters, I know I have that issue as well with my book, "Vectors of Corruption," where I have hit 29 Chapters without really saying much more than necessary! Just try to squeeze them together instead of splitting them apart into differentiated sections.
 

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