The Best Thing to Ever Happen | Teen Ink

The Best Thing to Ever Happen

May 12, 2016
By HannahRose00 SILVER, Hemet, California
HannahRose00 SILVER, Hemet, California
6 articles 0 photos 0 comments

The clammy air stuck to my face in the sweltering room. The smell of sweat and unclean basketball socks filled the closed in air. My breathing got slower as the clock ticked down. My feet were glued to the floor and everything was slowing down as my mind raced faster. I looked to my right to see the face of someone who didn’t need me there to continue on playing. Slowly, my coach stood up and scanned our faces searching for her next victim to feel her wrath of anger. We had a huge lead so why couldn’t I go out? Everything was crashing around me, the pain, the anger, the frustration. Every player had gotten playing time, which to them was nothing, but to me it was the chance of a lifetime. 1 min left. My eyes wandered until they met the eyes of my parents, I could see the disappointment emitting off their faces. I slowly bent down to look at my shoes when it hit me. I would never play this sport again. The last game of the season and the coach still wouldn’t play me. I watched the sweaty faces run up and down the court. My face would never ooze sweat like that again. Their breathing was fast unlike mine, which was steady as another foul was called. The dreaded buzzer went off after what seemed like hours. The echo rushed through my body slowly ripping me apart. It was finally over. Tears stung my face, but I managed to hold them back. My shoes were slowly untied, as I watched the ecstatic players, and viciously ripped off my feet as I crossed the court for the last time. I never looked back or cared about that sport after the final game. It was over and that was the best thing to ever happen to me.



Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 2 comments.


JThorne SILVER said...
on May. 31 2016 at 4:06 pm
JThorne SILVER, Hemet, California
6 articles 0 photos 1 comment
Her article is nonfiction so it does belong in this category so you need to back off. Her article's title is perfect because this "personal experience"(which btw is a nonfiction subcategory) was the best thing that happened for her because now she knows that she is done with this sport and will never look back. Also do you even know what unbiased means because if you did you would know it makes absolutely no sense in the context you used it in. Maybe you need to spend more time on teen ink or something because this is a place where you can post anything you want and you shouldn't be judged for your feelings or experiences so maybe you should "back out" as you put it.

on May. 26 2016 at 11:59 am
Mr.GetBuckets, Fremont, Ohio
0 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't reach young blood."

Although this may be a cool experience, it is still in the nonfiction category, it cannot be call the title that it has. It is unbiased to all the other stories, so back out