The Crash

February 13, 2009
By shayne oglesby BRONZE, Ardsley, New York
shayne oglesby BRONZE, Ardsley, New York
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Zoom, zoom, zoom, we fly down the hill and turn into my drive way and walk to my door step. Ding, dong ?who is it? my sister says
?Me Shayne,? I replied
?Thanks you can come in Jorge if you want,? I said
I grabbed some chips and soda then stuffed it in my bag and left. Jorge tried some wheelies on my bike then we headed to his house.
?Race you down the hill,? I said
?Sure? he said
?Go,? I screamed
(What Jorge doesn?t know is that I?m on a BMX racing bike and he?s on a mountain bike)I flew by him so fast he got scared and didn?t notice the bunch cars in front of him.AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! I heard him screaming

The author's comments:
Im shayne,13 years old and love riding bikes, playing basketball, and skateboarding

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