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Once there wasa perfect day of football
It was a very exciting and alarms
The crowd saw the quarterback throw the ball
The ball placed so perfectly in the arms
Another day of football to watch for
As the back explodes through the lineman's holes
The breaking of tackle after tackle or
Juking, trying to produce their own holes
The defense has their own masterful tricks
Trying to bust the heads of the others
Or jumping trying to make that amazing
Pick to impress scouts, and the other players
Hoping that people enjoy this game
Dreaming to get into the hall of fame





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bill bob joe said...
Oct. 30, 2009 at 10:21 am
nice work big fan of football but in the beggining fick sme spelling gramor
 
donaldj said...
Oct. 29, 2009 at 7:31 pm
This was a great peice of writing. I liked that you talked about how it was a great day of football. You also could have been more discriptive in your peice. You could have told us what teams were playing, who was the quaterback, and who was the running back. You also could have explained what the field the players were on looked like and maybe a great play in the game. You said," The defense has there own masterful tricks." It would have been nice to tell what some of the "... (more »)
 
happy said...
Oct. 5, 2009 at 10:06 am
I liked it but, it needed better words.
 
aajj said...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 1:31 pm
it was good you had good word choice
 
bernia said...
Sept. 29, 2009 at 12:04 pm
I liked your story it was very very good
 
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