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The Black Santa Claus

January 9, 2017
By TheFryGuy BRONZE, Defiance, Ohio
TheFryGuy BRONZE, Defiance, Ohio
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In the writing titled The Black Santa Claus written by Katelynn M I disagree with what she says because even though you thought you were less then you are you are not. I say this because I believe that everyone should be treated equally and believe they are equal. I cannot relate to this personally because I never had what happened to you happened to me and I never experienced it. I understand how it could have made you felt. What surprised me was you grabbing the ornament and crushing it because you thought you were less. No I do not have the same issue in my life, town, or school. You wrote this story very well with its sentence structure and everything. Your argument is a strong and valid one. Some quoted text to support my writing is “ I realized it was not the ornament, but it was me.” and “ I thought Santa was a jolly, kind-hearted person.


The author's comments:

That people won't judge themselves is what people should learn.


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