a perfect sunset

May 29, 2012
By textaholic1025 PLATINUM, Bloomville, Ohio
textaholic1025 PLATINUM, Bloomville, Ohio
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We ran out of the van doors. So far the date had been amazing. I chased you to the park. We laughed and smiled so much. finally we laid down on the side of the hill. You put your arm around me and we watched the sunset. It was beautiful and so romantic. I loved it.
"I love you." You whispered holding me closer.
"I love you too" I whispered back. I was in heaven just being in your arms. I wished the moment would never end. NEVER.
Then my older came up and POP went a balloon ruining the whole moment. I turned to slap him but you kept me there in your arms. Your smile made all thoughts of slapping my brother slip away. I slipped back

The author's comments:
i wrote this after I went on a date with my boyfrien

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