Did You Love Me To?

May 13, 2012
I remember staring at the cars below me from the overpass. Did you know what I was thinking? Or had it been pure chance that you had been there, that day. I remember the fear gripping me as I pulled myself over the railing and stared down at my fate. Had you felt fear to? Fear that you would lose me. I remember taking a deep breath before letting go. Did you think before you ran towards me, begging me to stop? Or was it just in the heat of the moment. I remember you helping me back over the rail before I jumped. Did you actually care? Or did you simply not want blood on your hands. I remember you holding me close to you while I cried onto your shoulder. Did I scare you half as much as you said I did? Or was it just a little white lie. I remember loving you. Did you love me too?

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DanielM said...
May 22, 2012 at 6:50 pm
Your poem was really good. i liked your first sentences that brought my attention. Suggestion maybe go in a little bit detial at the end. Good Job!!
TemperanceBrennan said...
May 22, 2012 at 6:41 pm
Please leave comments so I know how to improve!!!
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