First Time

January 2, 2011
By AnahiMunson BRONZE, Castroville, California
AnahiMunson BRONZE, Castroville, California
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Favorite Quote:
"What's in a name? That which we call a rose
By any other name would smell as sweet."

Romeo and Juliet (II, ii, 1-2)

Last night in the movie theaters I went and I met you for the first time. I remember it so clearly and I want to relive it again sometime. I was sitting down and you were walking towards me, and from the very beautiful locks of hair in your face I was confused, and asked myself if it was really you. Never had I seen such a beautiful walk, none like in the fashion runways of Los Angeles none like it, you walk was simple, gentle, it was almost like walking on clouds. I want to know your secret how do you encompass such amazing glances, I can only stare and hope that they’re for me. I walk towards you and I feel a sudden rush of thousands of millions of butterflies gushing with a warm with inside of me, thinking this is it.

The author's comments:
This piece desbribes the feeling that we teens experience when we go out for first dates.

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