First Love

October 24, 2010
By Anonymous

(Name),
     You are like water to me, being without you is painful, you are exactly what I need. You make me feel like nothing else does, with you the hours slip by like seconds.
     I'm so lucky to have found you, every time I see your face my heart heart soars. A day I'm not with you is a day wasted.
     Every day I wonder what I could ever do to deserve someone as amazing as you are. Thank you for putting up with me and everything I do. 
Love, 
(Name)


The author's comments:
This is about a girl I think I might be in love with, any comments or changes would be greatly appreciated. Enjoy!

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BrandonF. said...
on Nov. 10 2010 at 9:19 pm
BrandonF., Richardson, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Those who seek will find"

I LIKE THE WAY THE WRITER MADE IT SOUND LIKE SOMETHING YOU WOULD ACTUALLY SAY TO SOMEONE YOU LOVE

on Nov. 10 2010 at 5:45 pm
cocopebbles BRONZE, Rogers, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
you can close your eyes to the things you don't want to see,but you cant close your heart to the things you don't wan to feel!

love is magic sense of feelings that makes you an amazing writer!..like this person!

BrandonF. said...
on Nov. 9 2010 at 7:16 am
BrandonF., Richardson, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Those who seek will find"

this is gorgeous


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