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What You See

August 31, 2010
By _truth GOLD, Prospect, Kentucky
_truth GOLD, Prospect, Kentucky
16 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"it's better to be hated for who you are, than to be loved for what your not..."
"life isn't measured by the number of breaths you take but by the number of moments that take your breath away"


You see the pen in my hand and laugh. You laugh at my foolishness of writing. Look at me and tell me what you see because its not me. You see what you want to see and I can't change that. I don't care to change that. You're not worth the effort or the time. Your pleasure is power and attention, something you crave. You don't think I can't hear what you say? Know what you say? I laugh at your stupidity and dumbness. You wear a mask that shows only your eyes and others believe the mask; believe its reality. When its not. Its fake and I can see what you leave hidden in your eyes. Your betrayal for when your power is threatened. But in the end you will be alone because that is your weakness, your betrayal. And laughing, I laugh at you. You will be forgotten and the memories of you will fade but me and my foolish writing will someday be remembered and my laughing may soon fade but my memories will always live on.



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_truth GOLD said...
on Sep. 8 2010 at 6:28 pm
_truth GOLD, Prospect, Kentucky
16 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"it's better to be hated for who you are, than to be loved for what your not..."
"life isn't measured by the number of breaths you take but by the number of moments that take your breath away"

I'm glad. Thank youu :)

lgbt23 SILVER said...
on Sep. 7 2010 at 9:40 am
lgbt23 SILVER, Hurst, Texas
5 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
Paris is always a good idea.

phenomenal. spoke to me as the way my family and friends treat me about this writing. amazing job. tell me more.

_truth GOLD said...
on Sep. 4 2010 at 12:00 am
_truth GOLD, Prospect, Kentucky
16 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"it's better to be hated for who you are, than to be loved for what your not..."
"life isn't measured by the number of breaths you take but by the number of moments that take your breath away"

thankss.          

on Sep. 3 2010 at 5:11 pm
Stormythrone BRONZE, Anchorage, Alaska
4 articles 19 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing is good or bad. Its thinking that makes it so. -Benjamin Franklin

I really like this! It describes how people react to writing and how we are around other people. Great writing, keep it up