The Ocean

July 16, 2010
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His eyes sparkled like sun reflected on water. A sea blue with flecks of bright green and hazel. I was unprepared for the depth of his blue eyes, the way they looked at me said something I couldn’t understand. My words came to a slow stop as I gazed over my shoulder and saw the bottom of the ocean. The calm flow of serenity, but a splash of love hit the water, the instant I glanced at the man I would soon come to love.

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Shelbs13 said...
Feb. 26, 2011 at 8:49 pm
Who is this man? Might I know him?
Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 12, 2010 at 3:57 pm

This was a very beautiful description.  You wrote this recollection down with great talent.

Eyes have so much depth; they are the windows to the soul.

Gyl1224 replied...
Aug. 13, 2010 at 11:52 am
Thank you, it really wasn't very hard to remember them. even now I still remember them.
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