Run Away

June 4, 2010
By , El Paso, TX
I didn't know what I was doing,and I really didn't care.I walked into the dark night and ran.As I was running the breath coming out of me looked like smoke and I was shivering from the cold.I took out a phone that wasen't even mine and dialed his number.
I waited impatently.Once the word hello came out of the phone i felt like everything was going to be ok."I'm already at North Loop,"I spoke into the phone.We kept on talking and then he said "Ok go through Pecan Valley untill you hit the dirt road with the train tracks.Then you take a left,follow the train tracks,and tell me what you see as you walk."
I got to the dirt road and stared at the train tracks."I'm at the tracks," I told him.I told him the deatails of what was passing.Then a train passed when it wooshed by me the horific noise bothered my ears.There I was alone four nights before thanksgiving,walking in the cold night,and wondering if it was the right thing.I was thinking that I should go back ,but i didn't.
"Just go to the church and i'll wait for you there,"he told me.I whent to the church and waited.Waited.For him. There he was standing there he was three years older than me,was much taller,and much smarter.He held me as we walked.
We got to the front of his house.We stood next to a truck then he said "Babe look at me,"I stared into his eyes then he grabed me and gave me the most breathtaking kiss of my life.
We whent inside his house quiet not to wake anyone.We got ontop his bed and he started kissing me more."Are you shure you want to do this?"he whispered."Yes" I whispered back to him.Then he left to go get something and as he walked away I thout,I didnt know what I was doing that night,and I didnt really care.Why,because I was with him.

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Brina97 said...
Aug. 4, 2010 at 8:30 pm
Oh I just thought you were her.....
lament said...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 9:18 pm
im reallly close to her really really close i know her very well
Brina97 said...
Jul. 18, 2010 at 10:09 pm
I know her too, well sort of. We've texted each other a couple times, but i have no patience, so i usually get super angry, i think i'm bipolar, and i think i no who u r if i'm not mistaken... Please don't hate me... I don't mean half of the stuff i say..
lament said...
Jun. 30, 2010 at 9:53 pm
i know what happens afterword cas i know who wrote the story it gets real emotional and she ends up almost killing herself
Brina97 said...
Jun. 14, 2010 at 5:48 pm
:) It was a good story, it has a lot of potential, u have a few grammer mistakes, but u should really write another ;)
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