Hello My Beutiful Liar.

June 1, 2010
By .riley.bonjour.la.freek. GOLD, Charlotte, North Carolina
.riley.bonjour.la.freek. GOLD, Charlotte, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
It's not about where you are, it's about who you are. -Riley (me)
do you remember when you were four, and everything was possible? I remember those days, but dang, i gotta get back to reality. -Riley (me)

Dear My Beautiful Liar,

How do i start? Well, you were one of the best. Wrapping your arms softly around my waist, holding me close from the darkness that was slowly growing inside of me, and you keeping me away from the fooprints in the sand filled with my tears. You were the thread that sewed my heart back together...now, it seems as if the thread has disinigrated. "I found this other girl and she's looking for love, i'm not sure you are." Why don't you just rip my heart out and tear it into tiny shreads. You said you were a part of the beaten and the damned but i'm not sure if that was tre. The cuts and bruises on your arms, are they real? You said i was your perfect disease...guess what baby...they found a cure.

Hello My Beautiful Liar...I never want to see you again.

Not with love,

A small town innocent girl

The author's comments:
just read between the lines if you don't get it...i think you'll figure it out.

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on Jul. 20 2010 at 1:43 pm
Collado92 PLATINUM, Ft.pierce, Florida
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Wow amazing I agree this is creative and original. Good job you are a GREAT writer, keep it up. *Real talk

This conveys the hearts emotion and logic.Nice.

on Jul. 19 2010 at 6:23 pm
BaileyBaby13 BRONZE, Enumclaw, Washington
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Wow, I love this. It's awesome! But also sad, and kind of bittersweet. It's really creative and original, good job!,(:

on Jul. 19 2010 at 8:38 am
wind.and.rain.again BRONZE, Amherst, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"What is it you wish to do with your one wild and precious life?" Mary Oliver

this is so good! it almost made me cry. keep on writing!


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