The Black Hole

May 14, 2010
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It was supposed to be a game but the reality of it all slammed upon.
Before, I promised myself this would not happen again.
I knew it could only lead to worse pain.
He sucked me into his black hole in which he called his heart suffocating me.
At first I wanted to crawl out even if it left me bleeding.
I had no choice though to succumb to his warmth.
He's tried to teach me not to be afraid.
He doesnt understand though, that I cant possibly open my heart again when ive been hurt so much before.
I am afraid...

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Cordelia-13 said...
May 30, 2010 at 1:56 pm
Compared to some of my short stuff like this( I haven't posted them yet, so you won't find anything of what I'm talking about), this is AWESOME! I wouldn't have had the mind enough to make this. XD It's AWESOME! XDD
katie-cat replied...
Jun. 2, 2010 at 2:29 pm
This is pretty good.  Slightly scary, but in a suspenseful exciting way.  I'd like to hear more, though.  Good job! :)
HeronHero said...
May 29, 2010 at 4:37 pm
This is pretty interesting!:) Could you check out some of my stuff?:)
jonas_chick899 said...
May 29, 2010 at 8:55 am
yuppers, i find this interesting!! :)) i really liked it!! it made me think
once_a_redhead said...
May 29, 2010 at 5:31 am
interesting!!! i like it though i think u could have draged it out a lil more it seems kinda rushed but other than that good work!!!
AprilBlue replied...
May 29, 2010 at 4:19 pm
I agree with Katelyn (Redhead) and I'm sad this is true. However, it's very brilliantly worded and strongly touching. There are some grammar mistakes, granted, but I liked reading it.
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