When She's Gone...

April 20, 2010
By ♠♣♦♥Jon♠♣♦♥ SILVER, Albuquerque, New Mexico
♠♣♦♥Jon♠♣♦♥ SILVER, Albuquerque, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
" The greatest things in life are unseen, Thats why we close our eyes when we cry, kiss, and dream."

The moment our eyes met, I felt a feeling inside like no other. I told myself each day, "I can't wait for you to be mine." When that day came, joy filled my body, the feeling sprung wild like a bucking bull, my heart was satisfied at last. The one I wanted, was finally mine. Oh' how that joy sent me into a aroma of shock. Then, that one day. You came to me, with something that hurt like no other. You told me a lie; a lie out of anger. I was furious and hurt. I watched you walk away, hoping you'd turn back. As the sky filled dark and gray, the tears slowly slided down my face. I wanted to run after you; but it was to late. As the sun goes down, the pains don't go. And until this day I am still stuck in this whole. Still remembering the day, you walked away. And I could say "She's gone." I await lonely and empty in this hollow room, awaiting for you, the right one, to come free me; from this imprisonment of pain.
Please come; Save me.

The author's comments:
This is actually from expierence, so it was kind of hard to write...

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This article has 3 comments.

on May. 20 2010 at 10:45 pm
Meavescrete SILVER, Potomac, Maryland
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Very sad. We might try to understand the reason why they leave and never get it. We might want them to come back, but they don't always. I feel sympathy for you. The right one will show up.

k.james SILVER said...
on May. 11 2010 at 8:13 pm
k.james SILVER, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Love without action is meaningless, action without love is irrelevant." -Deepak Chopra

That is actually really sad, it moved me to tears for real (well not rolling down my face but watery eyes). I can relate because I have a similar situation going on. But really that was amazing, i love your work so please read some of my stuff and comment i would love your feedback :) <3

shaniab SILVER said...
on May. 10 2010 at 12:39 pm
shaniab SILVER, Hawthorne, California
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Awwww that's really sad


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