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Pleasant ? Fun ? Abetting ? Amusing ?

My mind reels off as I look for an apt word to epitomize her...

When I'm around her , I can never find a thing to worry about as I dissolve in juicy gossip and playful laughter !

She sometimes makes me wonder how we have so many latent reasons to giggle about ! Even Silence is so comfortable as long as we don't look at each other and collapse under fits of laughter ! :-)

Her Smile casts a luminous aura around me...
Her Pain authors the robust urge to script a code of relief and comfort...
Her Laughter makes me come alive !

Eyes Speak and Actions Listen...
Silence Smiles and Anger Cools !

All obstacles vanish and all sadness seems to perish. Everything negative fades out to be replaced by the joy of having a shoulder to lean on and a person to rely on...

My Best Friend... My Substantial Shadow ! :-)




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alice! said...
Apr. 16, 2010 at 2:38 am:
Yedii !! Full writer you becomin off ! :):) Mast it is re.. write more.. !!
 
Rose19 replied...
Apr. 16, 2010 at 8:12 am :
thank u ! sure :) !
 
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Manisha101 said...
Apr. 15, 2010 at 5:21 pm:
AHHH!! thz wz soo gud! ur a really gud writer yaar! definitely write more nd when i come down 2 India we shuld do one together! =) amazing I really lked it!
 
Rose19 replied...
Apr. 16, 2010 at 8:13 am :
sure mani ! can't wait ! :)
 
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silverstreex2000 said...
Apr. 15, 2010 at 9:52 am:
h.. and i loved the title.. :)
 
Rose19 replied...
Apr. 15, 2010 at 9:57 am :
thank u ! :)
 
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silverstreex2000 said...
Apr. 15, 2010 at 9:50 am:
Enrichng and refreshing. hoped it cuda been longer though.. cuz the english is soothing and not sharp or contrasting... well written :)
 
@ngel replied...
Apr. 15, 2010 at 11:10 am :
i agree too...its amazinggggggggggggg...........:) wonderful title... very well written...cud hav been longer..coz it attaches the reader to itself n we wanna read more n more...so keep writing...anyways very welll written :) :)
 
Rose19 replied...
Apr. 16, 2010 at 8:13 am :
thank u :) i'll keep tht in mind :)
 
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