Ya, its about her again

March 16, 2010
By Heartless17 BRONZE, Hemet, California
Heartless17 BRONZE, Hemet, California
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Favorite Quote:
"It's always the nice girls that fear players so much, but its the nice girls that couldn't make up their minds that broke off pieces of nice guys hearts till theres none left so they can no longer love and they become heartless players"


Im so worried:
She's got pretty blue eyes
You could get lost for hours studyin them
Shes got blonde hair stretchin' down her back
It makes a silk worm jealous, how perfect each strand is
She has a gorgeous smile
I find myself doin tryin anything i can just to see it shine again
Shes got the fairest of skin
Makes me wonder why she isn't on a skin care commercial
Her hands, they define her
Dainty, smooth, delicate but hard working
If only she would let me study them more
And thats not me gettin started
Her personality, its perfect
Shes always on the positive side of things
Only talks about the best side of people, even when i thought there wasn't one
She won't leave me bored, she can speak softly for hours
I about want to take notes, or record it, because i cherish every syllable
She loves her family, does almost everything for them
She lives by good morales, she's from the sweet land of Dakota
She knows just what to say to cheer me up, just when i thought nothing could
She shares her unconditional love for me, she would lay her life down for me
Though i'd never let her, but do the same for her
When i see her, talk to her, spend time with her, i think
"God sure took his time when he sculpted her every detail from bod to personality"
Shes what every lady should be
So i'm sure you question by now is:
How is he worried about a girl like that?
Well about every guy at school is trying for her every smile and conversation, or tried at some point
Why would she ever choose to keep me?
She's my prayer on my knees every night and day:"lord, i thank you for sending one of your angels to earth, i sure dont deserve no angel, but i pray she loves me too"


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on Jan. 11 2011 at 1:24 am
Heartless17 BRONZE, Hemet, California
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Favorite Quote:
"It's always the nice girls that fear players so much, but its the nice girls that couldn't make up their minds that broke off pieces of nice guys hearts till theres none left so they can no longer love and they become heartless players"

ya seems like girls stimulate the best of writing imagery for me, thanks

on Dec. 3 2010 at 7:53 pm
Authorgal98 GOLD, Frankort, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Let your mind sart a journey through a strange new world..."

Okay, beign a girl I thinkk this is sooooooo sweet I would die if someone said this to me! If there really is a girl like this, shwo her and she'll melt.

 

Great imagery and amazing word choice. Vivd, amazing, breath-taking, and I'm being dramatic but you deserve it!!!!!





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