January 9, 2010
By Anonymous

"hey" i said walking into the little house. "whats up" he said taking me upstairs, "listen im sorry about telling you no when you asked me out again, i just dont know if it would work out the second time if it didnt work the first time" i explained hoping he still wasn't mad at me. "oh its ok" he said smiling as we walked into his bedroom. I turned around to face him and he crossed the room to my side and pushed me on the bed. "what are you doing!" i asked shocked as he pinned me down with his knee and took off his pants. "just relax" he laughed pressing his lips aginst mine, I started punching him in the chest trying to break free but he just pressed harder, and i could feel my rib cage collapsing under the pressure, I cried out in pain as he fell on the bed next to me still holding me down and trying to force my hand down his boxers. I used my free hand to slap im in the face stunning him for a second, I took the opportunity to run. I got out of his bed and ran out the front door. The sun was setting and the biting wind burned my skin. I ran...i didnt know where i was going, nor did i care i just knew i had to get away from that house, away from him. After i ran for what felt like an hour i stopped and collapsed in the snow next to a big tree. I pulled my cell phone out of my jacket and called my parents once.....twice....three times....but still no answer. I sat shaking in the snow in my flip flops, t shirt, light jacket and jeans. After the pain in my chest had dulled to a light throb in the back of my chest i pulled my phone out and called one of my friends. "hello?" he answered sounding like I woke him up, "can you come pick me up?" i managed to say. "yea where are you?" I described what i saw around me because in all honesty....i had no idea where i was.

A while later I felt someone pick me off the ground and i opened my eyes to see kyle putting me in the front seat of his car. "man, if i didnt know any better i could have sworn you were dead". I pulled down the visor mirror and studied my reflection, I had deep, dark circles under my eyes and my skin was 1o times whiter than it usually was. I looked away, afraid of what i saw i flipped the mirror back up and looked out the window. My friend dropped me off at my house and i went inside knowing my parents werent home, I got in the shower hooing it would give my skin its color back. When I got out of the shower I heard my parents come in the front door, "Hannah are you here?" my aunt yelled as she carried bags of groceries down to the basement. "yea", I yelled back, "I just got out of the shower im going to get dressed." I closed my bedroom door and laied on the bed, everything went black....to be continued

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This article has 3 comments.

on Mar. 10 2010 at 8:11 am
sadButtrying956 BRONZE, Weslaco, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"I CAN DO DAT" lil flip

hehe so how old r u just asking:)

BMMSKC said...
on Mar. 9 2010 at 6:06 pm

on Feb. 11 2010 at 5:45 pm
sadButtrying956 BRONZE, Weslaco, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"I CAN DO DAT" lil flip

sound's so sad but yet u pulled out u didn't let your self get rape god must of gave u the power to kick his ass :)


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