Young Love

November 14, 2009
By radiosactive3 BRONZE, Campton, New Hampshire
radiosactive3 BRONZE, Campton, New Hampshire
3 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
Dream like you'll live forever, live like you'll die today.

"Ali," said Erik with uttermost passion "you are the best friend a kid could ask for, I know I'm only 10, but it's true."
"Thank you Erik! You are my best friend too, always and forever! Promise you will never leave?" said Ali
"Promise!" replied Erik.

The next day Erik ended up moving an hour away, and didn't talk to Ali for 3 years, all contact lost, friends no more...but she was always there, in his mind, never forgotten.

Three years later...."MOM MOM MOM!!!!" exclaimed Erik "YOU WILL NEVER GUESS WHO I FOUND ONLINE, IT'S ALI!!!!!"
"Oh really? Good for you!"
So they talked, the next day, he asked if they could stop in and say hi, his mother happily agreed.
"AHH!!! ALI!!!!!" He exclaimed as he ran at her and threw his arms around her as she did the dame to him "I haven't seen you in years!!"
"I know! Why did you leave? You promised you wouldn't!"
"It wasn't my choice! Trust me Ali! I thought about you the entire time! A kid tried ragging on you, I slammed him into a locker! Thats how much I...I...I love you!"
"You love me? Well, I'm glad the feeling is mutual!!"

A few days later they made plans to hang again, so many obstacles in the way, but Erik strives and worked hard to be able to see her gorgeous face again.

"Yay! I'm glad your mom let you come over!"
"I know, I had to do major sucking up, baby, you are lucky I love you and would do anything just to see your smiling face!"

That night they went to a play, and afterward in the pouring rain kissed and made promises to once again, never lose contact with each other...Erik is going to keep it this time....

The author's comments:
This is a true story, actually happened to me.

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This article has 4 comments.

h_girl123 GOLD said...
on Jan. 5 2010 at 11:12 pm
h_girl123 GOLD, Claremore, Oklahoma
10 articles 1 photo 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Playing life by ear"

You know, you could make a real book out of just this story. I think that if you added more details and prolong it more you could turn it into a "Happily ever after" story.

on Dec. 28 2009 at 8:52 am
That's a really sweet story. I'm glad Erik has someone like Ali and vise versa.

on Nov. 22 2009 at 9:42 am
Dancing_Shadows SILVER, Franklin, New Hampshire
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Aww Erik! That's so sweet!!!! ^_^ I'm super happy it got published! -hugs!!!-

on Nov. 20 2009 at 7:24 pm
alixzellyxyandinae BRONZE, Tilton, New Hampshire
2 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"How poor are they that have not patience! What wound did ever heal but by degrees?"
''These violent delights have violent ends and in their triumph die like fire and powder which as they kiss consume''
Both are Shakespeare (:

You're the best person I could have ever asked to meet. You know me better than ANYONE and I think you love me like no one else has. You're the most amazing guy in the whole entire world and I love you! So much...♥


Ali *aka....the girl in the story!* (:


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