Can Anyone Relate?

September 29, 2009
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This depression wants to consume me and sometimes I think it has. The sun I feel is hidden under a mound of clouds along with my heart. My family misses who I've always been, the love of my life falls apart at the sound of my lonely and strangered voice. This may be a time in my life where nothing feels as if hope is in the air, but I know that God is there. He is there everywhere I go and have been. He stands next to me as I put on my makeup in the morning, he has his arm around me as I cry the tears of fear. He seems to be nothing to some of the world, but he is my ultimate fighter, he is my angel, my guard that protects me at night. He is my hope for tonight, for the future to come. My father is my pillow I lean on, and I am his precious daughter. The girl who sins but he always forgives.

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aphilly said...
Nov. 20, 2010 at 9:25 pm

I can completely relate to this. You did an excellent job and I love the way you put your words together


melancholymariposa said...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 7:28 pm
i was feeling the exact same way when i read this......
Godisgreat<3 replied...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 7:56 pm
thank you I am glad you like it!
bohokay said...
Dec. 8, 2009 at 7:51 am
I know exactly how you feel. I was diagnosed with Situational Depression and Anxiety a couple months ago. No one really understands what its like to feel as if the world is falling down around you.
scarletP said...
Nov. 25, 2009 at 3:17 pm
i defiently relate to the first part, although i always have turned my back to god, i believed that if he had truly loved me or cared he wouldnt put me through such pain..
MangoMadness said...
Oct. 25, 2009 at 2:00 am
I can relate, except I screamed at god for doing this to me. I'm pretty much okay with him now, but I do still grouch at him like I would to my parents if I wasn't scared of them getting mad at me.
VampireDory16 said...
Oct. 23, 2009 at 9:49 am
I like it alot.
Flockm said...
Oct. 22, 2009 at 5:42 pm
I really enjoy this because how you said "But I know that God is here," because you where relating to your dad. Also I really like how you said, " He stands next to me as I put on my makeup in the morning," because even though he isn't there, he still is. Really great paper.
heartsday said...
Oct. 22, 2009 at 2:57 pm
Yea, I know people that came relate and write things just like this. It's a sensation across the nation.
FallenDarksideHuntress said...
Oct. 21, 2009 at 3:33 pm
Hey this is really good
jessi said...
Oct. 17, 2009 at 9:30 pm
wow. i love that! especially the part about relying on God and your dad, i can totally relate to that. nice writing!
This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 19, 2009 at 5:46 pm
I'm pretty sure she meant God when she talked about her dad. I could be wrong though. Great poem.
Kaylee S. replied...
Oct. 19, 2009 at 5:59 pm
haha ya i did mean god=] and thank you very much
jessi replied...
Oct. 20, 2009 at 4:57 pm
OH! lol. still makes sense!! still lovin it! :D
ma bad!!
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