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Dream

October 1, 2009
By Leojade94 BRONZE, Finksburg, Maryland
Leojade94 BRONZE, Finksburg, Maryland
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my passion and desire
the flame to mi fire
I dream big or not at all
I dare to stand tall in the
battle of it all
I daydream and night DREAM
but my DREAMS are movies
with a stong plot and a sad
story but when there is pain
there has to be glory
I DREAM of more to
understand whats in store for
thee because I know it is the key for the DREAM life entitled
to me
for this is what I
see when I DREAM


The author's comments:
THIS JUST LETS EVERYONE SE THAT YOU CAN LIVE OUT YOUR DREAMS AND SOMETIME YOU HAVVE THEM TO PUSH YOU TO YOUR FULL POTENTIAL.

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TigerLynn GOLD said...
on Oct. 9 2009 at 9:58 pm
TigerLynn GOLD, Maysville, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"She walks in beauty,
Like the night of cloudless climes and starry skies;
And all that's best of dark and bright
Meet in her aspect and her eyes."
--Byron

i like it all a lot but the last part"this is what i see when i dream"leave that out and its terrific.

on Oct. 9 2009 at 4:14 pm
a_bunch_of_nuns, Unknown, Wisconsin
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I really like your writing style! You fill your words with such a passion, and then you describe it so well. Keep writing!