Wall Of Memories

August 1, 2012
By jmac1780 BRONZE, Staten Island, New York
jmac1780 BRONZE, Staten Island, New York
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As I walk through the halls of where we used to play together, I see the old markings on the walls. They remind me of how I would draw our family with a crayon on our wall of memories. I took a different color each time, and everyday add something, like a family member we just found out about, or a new picture I drew. The wall soon filled up over time, as I dipped your paw in paint and my hand as well, and pressed them together, at the same time, right next to each other, on our wall of memories. Mine was purple, yours was green.

I don’t recall what made me think you liked the color green. After all, weren’t cats colorblind? I wasn’t sure, but I guess green was sort of your color. You had a green collar, a green toy, green this, green that. And it was all by accident. Although, I’m sure there are no accidents when it comes to that. But ever since that hand-printing day, I can’t remember a time when those two colors never looked so perfect together. And the wall kept filling up, and filling up, with more memories to look back on, and more promises to keep.

Promises? I don’t remember making any promises. But the promises we made were in each other’s eyes, and in each other’s hearts. I looked at you, and you looked at me with those green, peaceful eyes, and it seemed as though we promised to be together forever. The promises we made in our hearts were for us only, to stay best friends. But after you left, those promises seemed to do nothing but fade.

I remember the day you left very clearly. And boy, it was not pretty. I remember collapsing in tears, screaming that they couldn’t take you away from me. Sobbing my heart out, only to face the reality that there was nothing I could do. Time passed and I didn’t get any better. I hid my pain behind a fake smile and shining eyes. Shining from tears. I wanted to die. I couldn’t imagine life without you, and I wished for you to come back to me. I missed you terribly, and I couldn’t get you off my mind. I wanted the best for you, but I wanted you with me. I saw you everywhere after that day. Everywhere I went, there was a memory we shared on that couch, in that room, next to that wall, everywhere, and anywhere. You were everywhere, and all I kept thinking of was what I had and lost. I kept walking by our wall of memories, only to softly touch the markings, and break down in tears again. Every time. I wanted you to come back. My sweetie. My first pet. My best friend.

I could spend hours and hours gazing at our wall of memories, like they were the stars in the night sky. I could get lost in the thousands of memories we left there, until I finally rested my gaze on the two small hand and paw prints, purple and green, and right next to each other. No matter what the future held, that was one thing that could never be changed. Our promises on our wall of memories.

I love you Cricket <3


The author's comments:
I hope that people will know how much of an impact our pets have on our lives. They become our best friend, and even part of the family. My first pet will always be in my heart, and he was what inspired to write this piece about him.

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on Aug. 11 2012 at 7:07 pm
jmac1780 BRONZE, Staten Island, New York
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Thank you, it means a lot :) and yes haha, that was my favorite line too <3 i'll be sure to check out your work very soon :) xoxo

on Aug. 11 2012 at 12:30 am
WhiteStorme BRONZE, Roy, Washington
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I love this memoir. My favorite line is "I could spend hours and hours gazing at our wall of memories, like they were the stars in the night sky." its very emotional, beautiful, and even poetic. Great job. Please rate and comment on my nonfiction piece. Thank you so much. :)

on Aug. 10 2012 at 12:12 pm
jmac1780 BRONZE, Staten Island, New York
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aww thanks :) that was my goal :) xoxo

on Aug. 10 2012 at 12:10 pm
jmac1780 BRONZE, Staten Island, New York
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thanks :) i'll be sure to post more! xoxo

on Aug. 10 2012 at 12:10 pm
jmac1780 BRONZE, Staten Island, New York
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thanks :D xoxo  

on Aug. 10 2012 at 12:05 pm
jmac1780 BRONZE, Staten Island, New York
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aww thanks, it means a lot :') i'll be sure to put up some more work (:   xoxo  

on Aug. 10 2012 at 11:51 am
AcidRoses SILVER, Elmont, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Many that live deserve death and some that have died deserve life, can you give that to them? Do not be to hasty to deal out death and judgement, even the very wise cannot see all ends."


"Can't get no more free randy!"

Absolutely beautiful. So much emotion and imagery. I can sense you really loved your pet, wonderful poem.

on Aug. 10 2012 at 11:51 am
AcidRoses SILVER, Elmont, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Many that live deserve death and some that have died deserve life, can you give that to them? Do not be to hasty to deal out death and judgement, even the very wise cannot see all ends."


"Can't get no more free randy!"

Absolutely beautiful. So much emotion and imagery. I can sense you really loved your pet, wonderful poem.

on Aug. 10 2012 at 11:13 am
jmac1780 BRONZE, Staten Island, New York
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thanks blessings! (: xoxo

on Aug. 9 2012 at 11:59 am
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Keep smiling...Because life is a beautiful thing. And there is so much to smile about!
"Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing" Benjamin Franklin

Enjoyed this very much. I can feel the emotion through your words, how much you cared for your pet. Great job on your nonfiction. And love the title. And I also love the whole hand and paw thing you did with Cricket. Again very much enjoyed this! :)

Varlen-Byrd said...
on Aug. 8 2012 at 3:35 pm
Varlen-Byrd, Santa Cruz, California
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Favorite Quote:
“Imperfection is beauty, madness is genius and it's better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring.”

This article was very emotional. it makes me think of my first pet.  

on Aug. 8 2012 at 1:52 pm
MaeSilver SILVER, Columbia, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
Wherever you go, go with all your heart.

I hardly look at grammatical things, but rather the overall emotion of pieces. And this one? You nailed it. Great piece, thanks for the post ^-^

on Aug. 7 2012 at 4:28 pm
jmac1780 BRONZE, Staten Island, New York
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thank you!, i know i need to learn a lot about writing lol but thanks for the feedback, it means a lot :) I'll be sure to put up some more work soon! :) xoxo

on Aug. 7 2012 at 4:19 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

Gorgeous! This is very well-written in some places, though it does need some work. You tended to repeat some things. Great work, never stop writing, and with time, I truly think you could be amazing! Thank you for sharing this :)

on Aug. 7 2012 at 4:13 pm
jmac1780 BRONZE, Staten Island, New York
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thank you :)

on Aug. 7 2012 at 4:10 pm
this is a great memoir, i had a pet too, and i lost her :( so i understand what you felt for your pet. great writing skills; displays great understanding of how to capture the reader's attention with emotion. a job well done!

DanielM SILVER said...
on Aug. 7 2012 at 12:13 pm
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn't do." - Daniel Moto
" I've sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?"- Daniel Mathia

"People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person."-Daniel Mathia

“Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?” – Daniel Mathia

“If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.” – B. Reith

Great piece! I really could feel the emotions you had towards your pet. Awesome job


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