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Golden Tint

By , Farmingdale, NY
I rushed down the stairs skipping every other one. My feet up high and my hands shaking back and forth above my head. It didn't matter how fast I got there or where I was going for that matter but where I am now. I was moving, soaring nearly, my feet caressed the ground in a swift movement. Its for me, its for me, its for me I keep telling myself. I am almost there, so close my hand could reach and grab it. The golden egg was there. The light hit it just right. It was brilliant and my dream. My dream to open the edges and find my love. My love, oh my love, I would find. I began to peel back the aluminum with my tiny fragile fingers. It made the most beautiful sound crinkling in my clutch. The golden tint shown off the windows into the room making the kitchen appear as if magic. Bibbity- bobbity- boo and all was still for the golden tint. Oh my love, my love, my only love the golden easter egg with the brilliance that makes me curious.





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LightBright said...
Jun. 17, 2016 at 2:32 pm
That was a great writing that you wrote and you had some really good details. It really caught me in a very different way that i never felt before. Thank you for sharing that wonderful memoir.
 
--LoveHappens-- said...
Apr. 24, 2010 at 8:14 pm
It's great writing with great description and emotion but the topic is strange. Also I don't think it is fair that you keep posting these comments because I and other people have genuine comments and are not getting recognize. If you want real comments go to the forums and ask people to check yours out. That way it is more fair. Thanks so much and I would love it if you took at look at some of my work as well called The Pretty One thanks so much and please take into consideration what I hav... (more »)
 
monkeegirl007 said...
Apr. 22, 2010 at 3:58 pm
Thanks guys!
 
treechi said...
Apr. 20, 2010 at 1:11 pm
you grabbed from the lead and awed me with your descriptions!!
 
monkeegirl007 said...
Apr. 19, 2010 at 7:42 pm
thanks wat's up!
 
boogabooga said...
Apr. 19, 2010 at 6:47 pm
I want to read more....good start!
 
bob! said...
Apr. 19, 2010 at 2:50 pm
nice job!  Keep writing
 
monkeegirl007 said...
Apr. 19, 2010 at 2:39 pm
Thanks everybody!  Keep commenting!
 
Steve K said...
Apr. 19, 2010 at 12:21 pm
GREAT STORY!   Good job, keep writing!
 
smurfy2696 said...
Apr. 18, 2010 at 10:43 pm
love it!!!!! its really good...did you post anymore? if you did i want to read them...wow...once again...really good...i am a repetitive person...ok bye! 
 
monkeegirl007 replied...
Apr. 19, 2010 at 2:38 pm
yeah i did i will send them all to you.  please rememer to keep commenting!
 
ilovejdb said...
Apr. 18, 2010 at 7:36 pm
really good story(:
 
Piper said...
Apr. 18, 2010 at 6:48 pm
Very well written and lively.
 
monkeegirl007 said...
Apr. 18, 2010 at 5:16 pm
wats up everybody!
 
monkeegirl007 said...
Apr. 18, 2010 at 5:14 pm
Hey, that was really great!
 
monkeegirl007 said...
Mar. 5, 2010 at 7:07 pm
awesome! Whoo
 
monkeegirl007 said...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 5:37 pm
thanx firesoul
 
EGfiresoul said...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 7:26 pm
hey i liked it alot the best part my fav part was the part about you running yay
 
monkeegirl007 said...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 12:25 pm
Hey I wrote another one so it should be on here soon
 
monkeegirl007 said...
Feb. 26, 2010 at 8:23 pm
Thanks everyone for the comments
 
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