my sister Aubree

September 30, 2009
By tyler peterson BRONZE, Boise, Idaho
tyler peterson BRONZE, Boise, Idaho
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Sixteen months ago I was going to a party then my mom called to take her to hospital so we did. Then we ate at the hospital. Then we went back to the party. We had fun at the party. Two days later my sister was born. She has red hair. She is chubby. She didn’t cry at all. She was a cesarean. She was seven pounds and I was ten pounds. She was very sick. She had something in her lungs. But she made it. I was so happy that she made it. I love her very much.
And we went home. She was small and chubby. I had to watch her a lot but it was fun. She can almost walk. She can barley talk though. She is 16 months old. She eats toddler food and people food. She has a bunch of toys to play like a talking back pack, books, cars, skate boards and a real phone. I am teaching her how to play my X-Box. She can only play some games like Grand Theft Auto San Andres, Vice City and Three. But she dies in the game a lot. I love her very very very much and miss her a lot when she’s gone.

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jenelleb said...
on Oct. 21 2009 at 10:54 am
it was pretty good. but u need to update your writing skills.


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