September 29, 2009
By KrazyK1993 BRONZE, Beaumont, Texas
KrazyK1993 BRONZE, Beaumont, Texas
3 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life happens in the instant..."

Why do people still think they can claim you when they walked out on you over 10 years ago?

Why do they think they have the right to insult the people closest to you when they kept silent through everything else?

Who are they to insist you belong to them when you have seen them THREE times in the past 16 years?

I feel sorry for them.

THEY decided to break away.

THEY shut the door in my face.

YOU walked away, MOTHER.

So here's what I have to say.


The author's comments:
My biological mother walked out on me 10 years ago. My stepmother kindly asked for her blessing in adopting us. My bio. mother decided to throw it back in her face and decide that she suddenly CARED! What a joke. Her opinion walked out the door with her that day so many years ago. So here's to you, MOMMIE DEAREST!!

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Bambi67 SILVER said...
on Jan. 3 2012 at 2:13 pm
Bambi67 SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
9 articles 1 photo 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
remember that the future comes one day at a time.
Dean Acheson

sorry about this, would had love to read more from this but thanks for sharing! check out my work,thanks!=)

on Sep. 20 2011 at 12:06 pm
AliveInHim BRONZE, Glenside, Pennsylvania
2 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
When I am weak, then I am strong.

I can't imagine how hard that must have been. :( You may not be able to forget, and you may always carry the pain of your past, but in Christ you can be strong. =)


Col. 3:13 "...even as Christ forgave you, so also you should forgive."

on Aug. 9 2011 at 4:08 am
sunshine04 BRONZE, Vindhyanagar, Other
1 article 3 photos 253 comments
 totally agree with you

on Jun. 13 2011 at 11:07 pm
Alice_in_Wonderland GOLD, San Clemente, California
16 articles 0 photos 620 comments

Favorite Quote:
“I could give up, I could stay stuck, or I could move on, So I put one foot front of the other, No no no nothing’s gonna break my stride, “ –David Archuleta (The Other Side of Down)

aww... I'm sorry about that, the world is a cruel place and no one said it was going to be easy but I am glad that you have a positive outlook about it. Good job on this article! :) Since you are a christian writer(and so am I) would you mind checking out my poem, The Creator of the Universe Loves You," ? I think you will be able to relate. Thanks! Let me know what you think of it. :)

on Jun. 13 2011 at 10:53 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
20 articles 1 photo 375 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have a life. I just choose to ignore it."
-one of my friends

Wow this is really strong, and good for you! You rock!

ArcaneGhost said...
on Apr. 11 2011 at 9:03 pm
ArcaneGhost, Hendersonville, Tennessee
0 articles 0 photos 44 comments
Raw emotion is the right phrase. I can't even imagine what that consists of.

ama1013 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 18 2011 at 8:42 pm
ama1013 BRONZE, Fairfield, Connecticut
1 article 0 photos 25 comments
i feel really bad. what kind of mother does that to their own child? =(

on Sep. 25 2010 at 6:42 pm
Phantom_Girl GOLD, Ft. Carson, Colorado
14 articles 0 photos 279 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If it comes out of the lion's will be on the test."
-Mr. Bala

The raw emotion is amazing! And the last line perfectly emphasized the tone, it was my favorite.
That being said, I am sorry to hear about your mother. My best friend's mom is somewhat like yours. She is absolutely horrible to her, but when my friend started hanging out with her step-mom and told her mom that her step-mom was a much better mother, than her mom decided that she cared. It's pathetic.

on Aug. 31 2010 at 3:12 pm
WritingLoverForever PLATINUM, Bowling Green, Ohio
32 articles 2 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's not about success; it's about significance.

No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.

I am so sorry to hear about your mother. That must have been hard having your own mother just walk out on you like that. I can tell you put a lot of raw emotion into this article. You are a very strong person and you're an incredible writer.

on Dec. 21 2009 at 4:59 pm
Only,I PLATINUM, Taylorville, Illinois
45 articles 17 photos 123 comments

Favorite Quote:
This too shall pass.

Very deep, I am close friends with two people who have had biological parents walk out on them, it's a hard thing to see someone struggle with. This is amazing, I love the end "KEEP WALKING" part, very raw I think.

on Nov. 16 2009 at 4:59 pm
loud unafraid spirited emotional

on Nov. 9 2009 at 2:43 pm
BeckoningLovely GOLD, Wilmington, Delaware
15 articles 1 photo 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I think our favorite quotes say more about us than the people we are quoting," John Green

I like the end "KEEP WALKING." It shows your emotion, and what I like, your strength.

on Oct. 14 2009 at 12:17 pm
priscilla kirk, Hindsville, Arkansas
0 articles 0 photos 6 comments
OH MY GOSH that is soo good i luv it soo much!! =D


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