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If you asked me what a father is I would say someone who completes the other half of who you are the way a mother completes the first half. So you know who you are. But if you ask me who my FATHER is I’d say a man who makes you feel at home whether you know him or not. A man who is not afraid of farting on his daughter’s birthday or talking loud in a movie theater. A man that is as normal as you and I. A man who found himself 39 years into his life. But when he talks to you and you look him in the eyes you can feel his soul in every word. And all good is coming you can feel GOD Himself there as if he’s talking through him. And that feeling is indescribable. And I will cherish every moment I am with him. Because I love him and every inch, every centimeter, every millimeter in my body attracts to him.





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KoolChik said...
Jul. 15, 2010 at 9:20 pm
I meant to say at the end of my soul unites with him.
 
Kaetii said...
May 7, 2010 at 11:21 pm
It sounded very loving and . . . well basically GOOD . .  until the last sentence.. It sounds a little odd that your body is attracted to your father... I would change that
 
KoolChik replied...
May 16, 2010 at 3:48 pm
cool i have to change that thanks
 
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