Making My Way To Rediption

March 23, 2009
By adams BRONZE, Greenville, South Carolina
adams BRONZE, Greenville, South Carolina
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Chapter1:My name is Tiffany A. and im 15 years old.I live in South Carolina and i'm a eight grader.When i was only 6 years of age my real mother came to south Carolina to see me.But i did'nt know she was my mother,you see i have a god mother who i thought was my real mother,and that made me very confused. I have seven sisters and 2 brothers my close sisters is my guardens.I live with the oldest and the second to the oldest they take really good care of me.My mother is still in the picture but is a good mother? Not all the time, we have good moments and really really bad moments.My mother has a different view of the world.Don't get me wrong i love her but i don't love her ways.I never thought it would be posible to have 2 parents that refuse to love you. Yes it hurts but i will "Make My way To Rediption".

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its a short chapter of my life enjoy.

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Kailey4 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 24 2011 at 10:46 pm
Kailey4 BRONZE, Simpsonville, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Né io pitorre" - Michelangelo

You should work on grammar and punctuation, and also showing the story and not telling every little detail.

adams BRONZE said...
on Mar. 27 2009 at 4:04 pm
adams BRONZE, Greenville, South Carolina
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i really like it cause it is so real


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