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True Love :Broken

April 10, 2014
By Starakk SILVER, Nowhere, Other
Starakk SILVER, Nowhere, Other
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Once there was a boy who had fallen in love with a rich girl.He told her that he love her and he wants to marry her, to which the girl said that she loves him too but she won't marry him because he is not rich.Then they said goodbye to each other and went on there ways.

After 10 yrs...............
(They met in a mall)
"HI! how are you" the girl said happily,when she saw the man whom she had once loved.He was also very happy to see her. The girl went towards him and said"You know what! I am married and my husband is the Vice President of a big company. And what about you ?".The boy was standing with no expression on his all his happiness was gone at once.Suddenly a man came there and said to that boy"Hello! Sir maybe you are already introduced to her, she is my wife."Then he turned towards his wife and said "He is my Boss and we are working on a big project together. And do you know he has a lover who told him that he has to become rich if he wants to marry her, and from that day onward he is working very hard just to win her.Whomever she is, she is very lucky. "After listening this the girl was not able to speak even a single word or to do anything except for looking at her faithful lover with a zero on her face.


The author's comments:
Hi guys! just wanna say that never hurt someone feeling and never break trust of the person who cares for u this is not only for lovers .....there are something in everyone's life which is more important than money..........

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on Oct. 3 2014 at 9:57 am
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1492 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

Wow. Very deep and it just ... has a lot of depth and amazingness. It's absolutely, wonderful. You have such a talent and greatness in you; believe that, because you do. It's rather sad, but beautiful. The message in it, is good too. :) Thank you so much, for sharing this. :) 

Starakk SILVER said...
on May. 20 2014 at 12:19 pm
Starakk SILVER, Nowhere, Other
5 articles 0 photos 50 comments
thank u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

on May. 11 2014 at 6:27 pm
MattMattHatter PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Poetry is thoughts that breathe, and words that burn. "
Thomas Gray

very thought provoking I enjoyed it

Starakk SILVER said...
on Apr. 20 2014 at 3:43 pm
Starakk SILVER, Nowhere, Other
5 articles 0 photos 50 comments
thanks................. :- )

on Apr. 20 2014 at 3:42 pm
Roy.M.Hunter GOLD, Lamar, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"sticks & stones may break my bones, but words can't hurt me."

i love it its awsome wrighting!

Starakk SILVER said...
on Apr. 14 2014 at 6:21 pm
Starakk SILVER, Nowhere, Other
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thankew..........I will remember

on Apr. 14 2014 at 4:27 pm
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart."

I loved the message of this story! It is beautiful! But remember to correct spelling and grammar before submitting:) 

Starakk SILVER said...
on Apr. 14 2014 at 4:23 pm
Starakk SILVER, Nowhere, Other
5 articles 0 photos 50 comments
thank u.........I will try my best from next time

Starakk SILVER said...
on Apr. 14 2014 at 4:22 pm
Starakk SILVER, Nowhere, Other
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thankew..........:-)

Nintendude said...
on Apr. 14 2014 at 4:19 pm
I can only think of one word to describe this. SUPERULTRAEXTREMEAWESOMEMAZING!!!

on Apr. 14 2014 at 3:04 pm
TheOceansBlackBird SILVER, Richmond, California
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Favorite Quote:
One persons craziness is another persons reality
-Tim Burton

and then there's this one
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I really like it...but just for some constructive criticism...you may want to watch out for those spelling and grammar mistakes.... but otherwise it was really good!

Starakk SILVER said...
on Apr. 14 2014 at 2:53 pm
Starakk SILVER, Nowhere, Other
5 articles 0 photos 50 comments
thank u so much........

TheUniverse said...
on Apr. 14 2014 at 2:34 pm
TheUniverse, Everywhere,, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Exercise to stimulate, not to annihilate. The world wasn't formed in a day, and neither were we. Set small goals and build upon them.

Amazing story..... I love it and I hope it goes somewhere..  Keep up the great writing!!!


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