Who am I?

August 31, 2008
By Gabriel Martinez BRONZE, Rancho Cucamonga, California
Gabriel Martinez BRONZE, Rancho Cucamonga, California
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Who I am goes beyond simple things like talents; it has something to do with the core of who I am, my hearts condition. And truly, the heart is something beyond
emotion, even though emotion has its place. And indeed, talents has its place as well, but beyond talents and emotion there are thoughts which give an even clearer view at what
the heart contains. Actions that you make are another way to examine the heart. In most circumstances thoughts and actions would be enough, but I am still trying to find what condition my heart is in. Who am I?

The author's comments:
I wrote this because I am not completely sure who I am yet. Certain qualities of who I am such as my talents apparent, but I can tell that there is something more to who I am that I haven't figured out yet. I can also see some attributes in other people's lives that I would like to have in my life. That is why I wrote this, since I don’t have a complete definition of who I am, my writing will also have an incomplete definition.

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ally said...
on Sep. 16 2008 at 1:36 am
i love it because everyone is going through this stage and life and knowing that someone else is going through the same things make us more secure about the teenage mind.




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