Chris and Jet

September 3, 2011
By 1224L0v3 SILVER, Richmond, California
1224L0v3 SILVER, Richmond, California
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JET THOUGHTS:Her braid falls strait to her waist, sleek and black. Her eyes shine in the moonlight. She is the inhuman, breath-taking,pure. KAYLA THOUGHTS:Refreshing, is all I can think of to describe him. He is not a boy, but a guy if you know what I mean. JET and KAYLA THOUGHT:
Girl : Am I pretty?
Boy : NO.
Girl : Do you want to be with me forever?
Boy : NO.
Girl : Would you cry if I walked away right now?
...Boy : NO.
She heard enough, and was hurt. She walked away, tears ran down her face.
The boy grabbed her arm.
Boy : Your not pretty, your beautiful. I don't want to be with you forever, I NEED
to be with you forever. And I wouldn't cry if you walked away, I would DIE.
(Boy whispers) : Please stay with me?
(Girl whispers) : I will.


The author's comments:
Don't get burned...



I have decided to change the name to Kayla. I decided Kayla and Jet worked way better than Jet and Chrisanthia.

They love each other, but they just have not realized it, it is the kind of love that can never be broken, not even death. It can not be described by words.

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on Sep. 10 2011 at 9:38 am
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks."

"Not all those who wander are lost" --JRR Tolkien

"When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears." --Jose' Bergamin

Thats's alright no need to apoligize it was really good!!! :D

on Sep. 9 2011 at 6:16 pm
1224L0v3 SILVER, Richmond, California
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Do you guys like Kayla better???

on Sep. 9 2011 at 6:14 pm
1224L0v3 SILVER, Richmond, California
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Thx! I could not wait to pust this part, so I could not wait so I skipped ahead, Sorry!

on Sep. 9 2011 at 6:12 pm
1224L0v3 SILVER, Richmond, California
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Yeah, I thought it was really cute so I decided to post it here. It was my only excuse to right this. Thx for commenting!

on Sep. 9 2011 at 5:14 pm
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
35 articles 0 photos 782 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks."

"Not all those who wander are lost" --JRR Tolkien

"When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears." --Jose' Bergamin

Great idea but it doesn't really make sense.  It seems like it should be the sequel to your "Burned" but it's like you leaped forward 20 chapters.  Keep writing!

on Sep. 9 2011 at 3:54 am
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
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Favorite Quote:
‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

I think I have read this somewhere in the net...


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