Chris and Jet

September 3, 2011
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JET THOUGHTS:Her braid falls strait to her waist, sleek and black. Her eyes shine in the moonlight. She is the inhuman, breath-taking,pure. KAYLA THOUGHTS:Refreshing, is all I can think of to describe him. He is not a boy, but a guy if you know what I mean. JET and KAYLA THOUGHT:
Girl : Am I pretty?
Boy : NO.
Girl : Do you want to be with me forever?
Boy : NO.
Girl : Would you cry if I walked away right now?
...Boy : NO.
She heard enough, and was hurt. She walked away, tears ran down her face.
The boy grabbed her arm.
Boy : Your not pretty, your beautiful. I don't want to be with you forever, I NEED
to be with you forever. And I wouldn't cry if you walked away, I would DIE.
(Boy whispers) : Please stay with me?
(Girl whispers) : I will.

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ArrowHeart said...
Sept. 9, 2011 at 6:16 pm
Do you guys like Kayla better???
JoPepper said...
Sept. 9, 2011 at 5:14 pm
Great idea but it doesn't really make sense.  It seems like it should be the sequel to your "Burned" but it's like you leaped forward 20 chapters.  Keep writing!
ArrowHeart replied...
Sept. 9, 2011 at 6:14 pm
Thx! I could not wait to pust this part, so I could not wait so I skipped ahead, Sorry!
JoPepper replied...
Sept. 10, 2011 at 9:38 am
Thats's alright no need to apoligize it was really good!!! :D
FreedomIsMyVirtue said...
Sept. 9, 2011 at 3:54 am
I think I have read this somewhere in the net...
ArrowHeart replied...
Sept. 9, 2011 at 6:12 pm
Yeah, I thought it was really cute so I decided to post it here. It was my only excuse to right this. Thx for commenting!
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