Time, Not Space

July 21, 2011
By Free_One PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
Free_One PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"I am not invincible or unstoppable, but I stay strong because it is the only way to survive in this world."


Time. . . not space.
We don't need space.
Time, is all we need, to save the world from being filled with junk.
It's our world! And were trashing it!
How can we help? you might say. . .
use your time wisely instead of just sitting at home doing nothing.
Get out there, and help the planet!
We can do it, we just don't want to.
Now some of this isn't true. A lot of people do want to help.
But for some of you who don't want to help. . . that's cold.
Your saying that you don't care about the next generation who inherits the earth after us.
Your saying you don't care about the trees that are getting cut down for no reason!
Your saying. . . that you don't care for your race. . . which means you don't care for yourself.
How does it make you feel, to make you look it like this?
Does it make you angry?
Does it make you sad?
Or do you not care at all?
We need time, to get rid of the junk were filling our planet with. Because in time. Things do add up. In time. We will die off.
It's a terrible thought I know. Not to make you worry. But we better hurry up.
Because if we don't start changing. . . the world will. . .


The author's comments:
This, is for us. To help us understand that we don't need space! We need time to heal and nurture Mother Earth. Rise up, and help the planet! Rise up, and be great! Other wise. . . the planet that we should love with all our hearts, is going to die. . .

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on Oct. 13 2011 at 2:47 pm
Free_One PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
40 articles 1 photo 773 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am not invincible or unstoppable, but I stay strong because it is the only way to survive in this world."

yeah no prob!!!! :)(:

A_____ said...
on Oct. 9 2011 at 12:39 pm
A_____, Columbus, Ohio
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You're totally welcome!  And thanks for checking out my work!

on Oct. 9 2011 at 10:43 am
Free_One PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
40 articles 1 photo 773 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am not invincible or unstoppable, but I stay strong because it is the only way to survive in this world."

thank you! U made my day! I will check out your work soon! I have to get off now! sorry for not responding earlier!!!! Thanks though for reading! :)(:

A_____ said...
on Oct. 3 2011 at 6:26 pm
A_____, Columbus, Ohio
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Cool!  Could use some improvement with the punctuation but all in all I thought it was a really great idea.  Inspiring, too.  And I LOVED the last sentence. (:

on Aug. 17 2011 at 6:42 pm
Free_One PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
40 articles 1 photo 773 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am not invincible or unstoppable, but I stay strong because it is the only way to survive in this world."

thank you soooo much for the postive comment!!! you made my day!!!! :)(:

on Aug. 17 2011 at 4:40 pm
Dante1o1 SILVER, Huntington Beach, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Fighting is like a Disease, it only can spread and Hurt" ~Dante Dahabreh

I love the theme. We all need to make use of our time and not waste. Love tis work. Good luck in your entry. Its very relateable and could be published. Nice!

on Aug. 17 2011 at 4:01 pm
Free_One PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"I am not invincible or unstoppable, but I stay strong because it is the only way to survive in this world."

actually now it is: jellotinisjiggly24

on Aug. 17 2011 at 4:00 pm
Free_One PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
40 articles 1 photo 773 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am not invincible or unstoppable, but I stay strong because it is the only way to survive in this world."

thanks sooo much!!!! your wriing is really good 2!!! :)(:

paige14 GOLD said...
on Aug. 17 2011 at 3:16 pm
paige14 GOLD, Portsmouth, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Say what you need to say--John Mayer

This is piece is very emotional, I can tell you have a passion for the environment. It seemed to almost be written as a poem, but the phrasing was just a bit awkward. A great message though.

on Aug. 15 2011 at 6:57 pm
Free_One PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"I am not invincible or unstoppable, but I stay strong because it is the only way to survive in this world."

oh and my new user name is now: Malrox21213 instead of: writerfreak21231.

on Jul. 30 2011 at 9:44 am
Free_One PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
40 articles 1 photo 773 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am not invincible or unstoppable, but I stay strong because it is the only way to survive in this world."

thanks sooo much! :)(:

wasps said...
on Jul. 29 2011 at 4:53 pm
wasps, Other
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I think it is great that you wrote a poem/story to inform people on the state the world is in at the moment :) It is very inspiring :)

on Jul. 29 2011 at 9:58 am
Free_One PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"I am not invincible or unstoppable, but I stay strong because it is the only way to survive in this world."

please comment on this. if u liked it or not. Thanks!




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