Tio(uncle)In memory of Fernando Luis Ostolaza.

January 2, 2010
By Ostolaza SILVER, Bluffton, South Carolina
Ostolaza SILVER, Bluffton, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
I think that if your writing is good for you then its the best it can be.

I miss you.
I remember the last time you felt alive.
When you have your left hand in your beard, and
Your rite putting your music.
When you ask Natalie to sit in your lap,
And tell you of her singing class as
I sit in your lap to tell you of my modeling class.
I saw you in the hospital and
My heart broke in a thousand parts.
You saw your flowers so far
I had to see it so closes.
Why you left me?
I miss you
I need you I live like a stranger
Why can’t you help me?
I don’t want to feel your presents.
I want to feel your skin.
I can’t go out at night I see you.
I am scared to go out I need you now tio(uncle).

The author's comments:
My uncle died about there years ago. I miss hem a lot. When I start to see hem I got scared and I start to write. This was the best story I have written of hem. In memory of my uncle Fernando Luis Ostolaza.

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This article has 7 comments.

Ostolazapr said...
on Jan. 25 2010 at 11:13 am
Good girl! I can see the talent flowing....just like you daddy, who's very proud of you!!!

macho said...
on Jan. 18 2010 at 2:52 pm
u n your family will remember him......

CRios said...
on Jan. 11 2010 at 3:08 pm
I Hope God Blessing You and giving the change that you dream come true. Good Luck / keep going

abdiel said...
on Jan. 9 2010 at 7:52 pm
NiCe KeEp WrItInG

MARLA said...
on Jan. 8 2010 at 9:59 pm

nati said...
on Jan. 8 2010 at 8:33 pm
realy good it realtes to everyone in a way well with every one that lost someone important i like it!!!!

GLadys said...
on Jan. 8 2010 at 7:09 pm
very nice, keep writing you'll go far


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