Mourning Jog

June 19, 2009
By JamminJos23 GOLD, Sandy, Oregon
JamminJos23 GOLD, Sandy, Oregon
11 articles 2 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stand up for what is right, even if you are standing alone.


The tears felt cold on my face as I ran. At six in the morning, I'm a wreck. The news hit me like a bomb in the chest. Why? Why did it have to happen to him? Why not me? The other car just had to run a red light, didn't it. It isn't fair. My heart is in shreads. My legs feel heavy as I run past each house. I'll never be able to attend another father/daughter dance. I'll never be able to say "Happy Father's Day, Dad!" The wind is picking up, I'm breathing heavier. I miss him so much. The tears are coming faster and heavier. I'm trembling. It's not fair. "He's dead, there is nothing you can do." That's what they all said. I wish there was something I could do. Dad, if you can hear me, I love you.



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This article has 6 comments.


greeneggs90 said...
on Jul. 9 2009 at 5:42 am
this is really deep. you had very good detail in this thing. i like it a lot.

on Jun. 29 2009 at 7:18 pm
pinksage33 BRONZE, Woodstock, New York
4 articles 1 photo 211 comments
This is really good!!!

on Jun. 28 2009 at 3:05 am
lexi10824 PLATINUM, Portalnd, Oregon
25 articles 2 photos 69 comments
jossy...this is soooo good. it has mucho emotiono in it. I think that you should put up that one you told me about with the walking on different stuff!!! ;)

blah said...
on Jun. 28 2009 at 3:02 am
Hi jos, this is really good!!

on Jun. 27 2009 at 3:14 am
lexi10824 PLATINUM, Portalnd, Oregon
25 articles 2 photos 69 comments
Jossy...I love this so much! There is so much emotion in it! I honestly almost cried. (and you know that that means a lot coming from me. :)

on Jun. 24 2009 at 7:23 pm
pinksage33 BRONZE, Woodstock, New York
4 articles 1 photo 211 comments
WoW!!! this is good. here is another pice i wroght.

TeenInk.com/raw/Pride/article/117536/The-Way-People-Treat-Me/


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