Doggy Heaven

May 12, 2009
By thedaydreamer13 BRONZE, Delta, Ohio
thedaydreamer13 BRONZE, Delta, Ohio
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My doggy came walking up to me all sad and down like. I stood there staring at her old face and I realized something must gone wrong.
" Mom, there must be something wrong with Abby for she looks real bad."
" There is nothing wrong with old dog though she looks good as dead."
" We'll see who write or wrong and by then she'd be dead!" My small family waited for what seemed forever. All the while my dog became worse. That very next day my mommy gave up and amitted.
" Your right and i'm wrong. I am so sorry for my disbelive. Now we must hurry to the closest vet to save this poor doggy!" By the time we arrived there my poor dog was on its way to doggy heaven!


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on Jul. 15 2009 at 2:33 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

I really love this story! I'm sorry about your dog, Abby. Keep writing, you are great!

<3

on May. 29 2009 at 3:31 pm
thedaydreamer13 BRONZE, Delta, Ohio
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thanks for reading this story! some parts of this story are true.... i did have a dog named abby who died. but, not like this.




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