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Your Hatred Fuels off My Love

You don't laugh at a funeral
Or lie in a grave.
I am lost in Your ever winding cave

They feed You arrogance and lies
Yet You love them with every breath and sigh

I love you so very much
Even as you beat me with my crutch





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amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse said...
Mar. 29, 2010 at 1:01 am
possibly crush me in your clutch is better than beat me with my crutch??  idk   it is a rather powerful poem and it would be great if you were to make it longer
 
dylonmichael said...
Sept. 2, 2009 at 10:20 am
It's very powerful i love it
 
lovehate29 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 31, 2009 at 10:22 pm
This is very powerful. I like the meaning you put behind it. Great job!
 
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