Your Hatred Fuels off My Love

May 13, 2009
By hxcRocker DIAMOND, Haiku, Hawaii
hxcRocker DIAMOND, Haiku, Hawaii
59 articles 2 photos 88 comments

You don't laugh at a funeral
Or lie in a grave.
I am lost in Your ever winding cave

They feed You arrogance and lies
Yet You love them with every breath and sigh

I love you so very much
Even as you beat me with my crutch


The author's comments:
The love that connot be. Fools cascade her with fake tidings of love
Yet no matter how hard i try she just hates me more

This is dedicated to her

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on Mar. 29 2010 at 1:01 am
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

possibly crush me in your clutch is better than beat me with my crutch??  idk   it is a rather powerful poem and it would be great if you were to make it longer

on Sep. 2 2009 at 10:20 am
dylonmichael GOLD, El Dorado, Kansas
10 articles 3 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
i have two one is "live life as if it were your last day on earth" and two is "never make some one your everything because when they leave you you have nothing"

It's very powerful i love it

on Aug. 31 2009 at 10:22 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

This is very powerful. I like the meaning you put behind it. Great job!


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