My dark hearts angel

May 7, 2009
Release this pain, i cant take it anymore, my dark hearts angel,open up the broken door.Bring peace to this torn life,get rid of the tears before i drown in this unwanted life.All i need is love,only you can bring it,all i need is an angel to turn my dark heart light,all i need is you my angel, save me from this unwanted life,save me my angel,and just let me die......





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writtendesires said...
Jul. 6, 2009 at 6:45 pm
You know what.it was different but strangely enough i liked it. Love the use of words.
it was unique and welll it was Intriguing.
kind of depressing...Nicce(=
kudos.
 
tgir85 said...
Jun. 9, 2009 at 5:02 pm
tnxs 4 responding. i write poetry and short stories/songs yes but this is the first time ive written something dark like that... any advice?
 
Kristopher said...
Jun. 9, 2009 at 3:57 am
hey man (girl/lady) thanks for the comment. I like what your doing but are you a musician or songwriter? I like your wordage but it needs to be on sort of a meter. but then again I could have no idea what I talk about being the fact that I've only written to music
 
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