My dark hearts angel

May 7, 2009
By tgir85 GOLD, Katy, Texas
tgir85 GOLD, Katy, Texas
13 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I only put you through that test to see if you would keep the faith or give up..."


Release this pain, i cant take it anymore, my dark hearts angel,open up the broken door.Bring peace to this torn life,get rid of the tears before i drown in this unwanted life.All i need is love,only you can bring it,all i need is an angel to turn my dark heart light,all i need is you my angel, save me from this unwanted life,save me my angel,and just let me die......


The author's comments:
the song imaginary by EVANESCENCE kina inspired this

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on Jul. 6 2009 at 6:45 pm
Lifesbutadream BRONZE, Hesperia, California
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Favorite Quote:
Change is just a new begining

You know what.it was different but strangely enough i liked it. Love the use of words.

it was unique and welll it was Intriguing.

kind of depressing...Nicce(=

kudos.

tgir85 GOLD said...
on Jun. 9 2009 at 5:02 pm
tgir85 GOLD, Katy, Texas
13 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I only put you through that test to see if you would keep the faith or give up..."

tnxs 4 responding. i write poetry and short stories/songs yes but this is the first time ive written something dark like that... any advice?

on Jun. 9 2009 at 3:57 am
Kristopher BRONZE, Grant, Michigan
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hey man (girl/lady) thanks for the comment. I like what your doing but are you a musician or songwriter? I like your wordage but it needs to be on sort of a meter. but then again I could have no idea what I talk about being the fact that I've only written to music




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