Is Death Me?

October 24, 2011
By CompEet3 PLATINUM, Cincinnati, Ohio
CompEet3 PLATINUM, Cincinnati, Ohio
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Death,one word in my shadeed vocabulary.Very popular, among my kind.Loosing something so precious. Loosing what cant be replaced. Loosing life. Sliping away from my fingertip's. Dark, deep suffocating piece of life. The end. Or is it the begining? What is death like? Is it painful or is it relieving? Do you drown in the spaces of inbetween? Is there an upside or a downside? Are you even listening? I only speak once, so listen. death strike's my eye's, black. In all black everyday,is me. Gothic, nope. Freedom of expression, yes.Judged by critics, yes. Do i care? Nope! Everyone seem's i know about death. That I am in mourning, but death lies in a blank corner of my mind. Tragic loss or sweet salvation.Is death me? Or is it my best friend. Who is death? I think death is me.

The author's comments:
I hope many people read this piece. It's all that has beeen on my mind lately for no apparent reason. You cant make up writing. You are writing.

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on Dec. 4 2011 at 3:15 pm
KarinaDavidyuk GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
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Great work but watch out for misspellings

on Nov. 26 2011 at 11:28 am
Malina_FDM BRONZE, River Forest, Illinois
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This is great. Nothing that you read everyday... Not something that everybody thinks about all the time.. Or do we choose not to think about it?? I understand how your feeling with your words... great job. Keep Writing..

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on Nov. 26 2011 at 11:28 am
TapTap SILVER, New Berlin, Wisconsin
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I always think about this....but i could never put it into words. Great job! I think its more puctual in paragraph form!



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